Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Troubled Shopkeeper
Abel complains about his financial problems, the heat, and the arrival of his nephew, while recalling his lost son. Herman is sent from the city to spend two weeks in the country.
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Abel Complains of Misfortune — Abel jokes bitterly about financial troubles, the heat wave, and one misfortune after another. Characters: Abel Shaddick
Location: Abel's delicatessen
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Abel Remembers His Lost Son — Abel reflects on his long years in the shop and the son he lost in the war. Characters: Abel Shaddick
Location: Abel's delicatessen
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Stanley Arrives — Abel describes his nephew Stanley's arrival as another trouble in his life. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Stanley Banner
Location: Abel's delicatessen
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Herman Is Sent Away — Herman's grandmother sees him off for a two-week stay in the country. Characters: Herman D. Washington, Grandmother
Location: City bus departure point
An Unplanned Welcome
Herman reaches the country and finds that his expected arrangements have gone wrong. Abel directs him toward the lake as Herman speaks about his brother and the fishing trip they once hoped to share.
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Grandmother Gives Instructions — She tells Herman to board the correct bus and encourages him to send postcards. Characters: Herman D. Washington, Grandmother
Location: City bus departure point
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Herman Finds Plans Have Gone Awry — Herman discovers that the expected arrangements for his stay have not worked out. Characters: Herman D. Washington, Abel Shaddick
Location: Country destination
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Abel Directs Herman to the Lake — Abel points Herman toward a nearby lake and says he will contact the woman responsible for him. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Country destination
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Herman Talks About His Brother — Herman hopes to fish and recalls his overseas-serving soldier brother's promise to take him fishing. Characters: Herman D. Washington
Location: On the way to the lake
A Fish and a Choice
Abel and Herman fish together, and Herman catches an enormous fish he wants to dedicate to his brother. Abel offers him a choice, and Herman decides to stay with Abel for a few days.
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Abel and Herman Go Fishing — Abel and Herman eventually go fishing together. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Lake
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Herman Catches a Huge Fish — Herman catches an enormous fish and wants it mounted with a plaque dedicated to his brother. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Lake
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Herman Chooses to Stay — Abel offers Herman a choice between going home the next morning and staying a few days; Herman chooses to stay. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Abel's home
Standing by the Child
Abel and Herman begin sharing a home and daily routines. Gloria challenges Abel's motives, but he insists Herman will remain; at the country club, Abel answers condescending remarks and exposes the club's hypocrisy.
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They Share Daily Routines — Abel and Herman begin sharing Abel's home and daily routines. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Abel's home
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Gloria Challenges Abel — Gloria criticizes Abel for taking Herman in and questions whether he truly cares about him. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Gloria Ross
Location: Unspecified
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Abel Stands by Herman — Abel insists Herman will stay and admits he is not an especially gracious man. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Gloria Ross
Location: Unspecified
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Herman Visits the Country Club — Abel brings Herman to the club as Gloria's guest, where a member makes condescending remarks about Herman. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Gloria Ross, Herman D. Washington
Location: Country club
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Abel Challenges Club Hypocrisy — Abel uses sarcasm to expose the hypocrisy of the club's self-praise and restricted facilities as Herman prepares to swim. Characters: Abel Shaddick, Herman D. Washington
Location: Country club