Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Pattern Of Comas
Susan loses her friend Nancy after a routine procedure and notices another healthy patient becoming comatose. Her chart review reveals repeated cases centered on operating room number eight.
Key Events
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Nancy Enters Coma — Nancy becomes brain dead after a routine procedure, devastating Susan. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Nancy Greenly
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
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Another Surgical Coma — Another young healthy patient falls comatose during knee surgery. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Operating room
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Pattern In Operating Room Eight — Susan finds that similar cases occurred repeatedly in operating room number eight. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
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Jefferson Transfers Revealed — The affected patients had tissue samples taken before transfer to the Jefferson Institute. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
Authority Closes In
Susan's questions offend Dr. George and draw disciplinary pressure from Dr. Harris. Nancy's death and the morgue inquiry provide a possible explanation involving carbon monoxide.
Key Events
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George Rejects Suspicion — Susan's chart request offends Dr. George, who treats the pattern as unproven. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. George
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
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Harris Threatens Dismissal — Harris reproaches Susan, threatens dismissal, and requires psychiatric consultation. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
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Nancy Dies — After Nancy dies, Susan attends the postmortem and asks how coma could be induced. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Nancy Greenly
Location: Hospital morgue
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Carbon Monoxide Theory — A pathologist suggests carbon monoxide poisoning as a possible undetectable method. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Hospital morgue
The Hidden Mechanism
A visit to the Jefferson Institute and Kelly's warning push Susan deeper into the investigation. She finds a remotely controlled carbon monoxide system connected to operating room number eight.
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Weekend At The Seaside — Harris gives Susan time off, and she spends a relaxing weekend before returning to Boston. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Seaside
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Jefferson Institute Visit — Susan visits the austere institute and learns that a physicians' tour will occur Tuesday. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Nurse
Location: Jefferson Institute
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Kelly Is Electrocuted — Kelly, who supported Susan's suspicions, is fatally electrocuted by an unknown man. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Kelly
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital
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Basement Gas Tank Found — Susan finds a remotely controlled tank connected through ventilation to operating room number eight. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Hospital basement
The Organ Market
Susan survives an attack and infiltrates the Jefferson Institute during a physicians' tour. She discovers that the facility is a cover for an international human organ black market.
Key Events
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Hospital Attack — A stalking attacker tries to assault Susan, but she escapes and traps him in the cadaver cooler. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Hospital anatomy lab
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Institute Tour Begins — Susan joins a tour presenting the institute as an inexpensive care facility for comatose patients. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Nurse
Location: Jefferson Institute
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Restricted Areas Investigated — Susan leaves the tour and secretly investigates restricted areas inside the institute. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Jefferson Institute
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Organ Market Exposed — Susan discovers the institute conceals an international organ market serving the highest bidder. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Jefferson Institute
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Escape On An Ambulance — Security spots Susan, but she escapes atop an ambulance transporting organs toward the airport. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Jefferson Institute compound
The Surgeon Unmasked
Susan reports her discovery to Harris, who drugs her and prepares an operation in room eight. The gas line is destroyed, Susan awakens, and police arrest Harris.
Key Events
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Escape On An Ambulance — Security spots Susan, but she escapes atop an ambulance transporting organs toward the airport. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler
Location: Jefferson Institute compound
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Susan Confronts Harris — Susan rushes to Harris to report her discovery, and he offers her a drink. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Dr. Harris's office
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Susan Is Drugged — Susan becomes incapacitated with severe abdominal pain and realizes she has been drugged. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Dr. Harris's office
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Operating Room Eight Revealed — Harris insists on operating room number eight, exposing the connection to the coma scheme. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital operating room
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Gas Line Destroyed — The gas line from the basement is destroyed before it can render Susan brain dead. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Hospital basement
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Harris Arrested — Susan awakens after surgery, while police officers summoned by Mark arrest Harris. Characters: Dr. Susan Wheeler, Dr. Harris
Location: Boston Memorial Hospital