Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A City Powered By Magic
Excelsior is introduced as a society built on plant- and fire-powered magic rather than science. Police investigations depend on spells, magical defenses, and psychic access to the stream.
Key Events
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Magic-Based Society — Excelsior relies on plant- and fire-powered magic instead of science, oil, electricity, or coal.
Location: Excelsior
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Precinct Investigative Tools — Police use spells, magic discs, and psychic access to the stream for investigations.
Location: 17th Precinct
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Prophet Murdered — The executive prophet is murdered in a North Beach alley on September 23, 2011.
Location: North Beach back alley
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Silent Crime Scene — Detectives determine that the murder was brutal and hidden by a charm that deadened sound.
Location: North Beach back alley
The Cost Of Prophecy
The murder of an executive prophet exposes a history of prophetic testimony, magical punishment, acquittal, and retaliatory killings. The case reveals how mistaken identity can produce lasting consequences.
Key Events
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Old Prophetic Testimony — Fifteen years earlier, a prophetic vision led to testimony in a rape and murder case.
Location: Mendocino, California
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Magical Life Sentence — The accused man received a life sentence of reliving the victim's final experiences.
Location: Excelsior court system
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Acquittal After Thirteen Years — The convicted man was acquitted thirteen years later after the mistaken identity became known.
Location: Excelsior court system
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New Life As A Child — A magical remedy gave the acquitted man a new life as a child.
Location: Excelsior
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Retaliatory Murders — The transformed man is revealed to have murdered the prophet and the acquitting judge.
Location: Excelsior
Visions Of The Stoics
Wilder experiences visions connected to the long-absent Stoics, a group committed to destroying magic. He reopens the old investigation and recruits Jimmy because of the rookie's intuitive potential.
Key Events
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Wilder Sees Visions — Wilder begins seeing visions connected to the anti-magic Stoics. Characters: Wilder Blanks
Location: Excelsior
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The Stoics Return — Wilder connects the visions to a group dedicated to destroying magic. Characters: Wilder Blanks
Location: Excelsior
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Unsolved Historical Murders — Wilder recalls that the Stoics committed murders twelve years earlier and then disappeared. Characters: Wilder Blanks
Location: Excelsior
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Wilder Reopens Investigation — Wilder retrieves a former investigative partner to help examine the Stoics case. Characters: Wilder Blanks
Location: 17th Precinct
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Jimmy Joins The Case — Wilder pairs rookie detective Jimmy Travers with the returning investigator. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: 17th Precinct
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Intuitive Savant Identified — Jimmy is recognized as an intuitive savant with significant investigative potential. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: 17th Precinct
The Protected Tenant
A nuisance investigation in an apartment building unexpectedly gives the Stoics access to a protected professor. The professor is killed with a method that ordinary magical defenses cannot explain.
Key Events
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Nuisance Case Begins — The investigators examine a nuisance case in an apartment building. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Apartment building
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Protected Tenant Targeted — The investigators unintentionally give the Stoics access to a protected tenant. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Apartment building
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Professor Murdered — The protected college professor is murdered using the Stoics' unexplained method. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Apartment building
A Weapon Outside Magic
The investigators learn that the Stoics use mechanical rather than true magic. Their bullet exposes a new threat that the magical world has no known defense against.
Key Events
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Advanced Research Revealed — The victim is identified as a professor of advanced magical engineering and biology. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Apartment building
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Mechanical Magic Exposed — The Stoics are revealed to use mechanical rather than true magic. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Apartment building
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Magic Cannot Defend — The investigation establishes that nothing in this world can defend against the Stoics' mechanical weapon. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Excelsior
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Threat Remains Unresolved — The revelation leaves Excelsior facing a threat outside its magical defenses. Characters: Wilder Blanks, Jimmy Travers
Location: Excelsior