Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Road to Redemption
Graeme and Clive embark on a sci-fi road trip, accidentally encountering Paul and drawing government attention.
Key Events
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Comic-Con Road Trip — British enthusiasts travel to the US for a convention and UFO hunting. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings
Location: Southwestern U.S. Desert
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Diner Crash — Accidentally crash into rednecks' truck after a tense encounter. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings
Location: Remote Diner
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Alien Discovery — Discover Paul, a grey alien, after a car crash. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice)
Location: Desert Highway
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Government Pursuit Begins — Agent Zoil informs superiors he is closing in on Paul. Characters: Agent Zoil, Haggard
Location: Crash Site
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RV Park Camp — Camp at a fundamentalist RV park; Paul argues with Clive. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: Christian RV Park
Flight from Authority
The group evades Agent Zoil and rogue agents, forming bonds while Paul reveals his past and heals Ruth.
Key Events
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RV Park Camp — Camp at a fundamentalist RV park; Paul argues with Clive. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: Christian RV Park
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Ruth's Healing — Paul cures Ruth's blind eye by transferring the condition. Characters: Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: RV Park
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Bar Fight Escape — Paul terrifies rednecks into fainting during a bar fight. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: Desert Bar
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Zoil Interrogation — Ruth plays dumb to escape Agent Zoil's questioning. Characters: Ruth Buggs, Agent Zoil
Location: RV Park
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Rookie Rebellion — Haggard disobeys Zoil's orders to pursue Paul independently. Characters: Haggard, Agent Zoil
Location: Federal Base
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Tara's House Siege — Agents surround the home; O'Reilly ignites gas, destroying it. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs, Agent Zoil, Haggard
Location: Tara's Home
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Cliff Escape — Haggard pursues the RV but crashes off a cliff. Characters: Haggard
Location: Mountain Cliff
Siege at the Monument
Cornered at Devils Tower, Zoil reveals his true allegiance, and Paul risks his life to save Graeme.
Key Events
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Cliff Escape — Haggard pursues the RV but crashes off a cliff. Characters: Haggard
Location: Mountain Cliff
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Military Order — Zoil promises capture; superiors order a military response. Characters: Agent Zoil
Location: Command Center
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Devils Tower Signal — Group sets off fireworks to signal Paul's mothership. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: Devils Tower National Monument
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Helicopter Standoff — Agents arrive; Zoil shoots his own men to aid Paul. Characters: Agent Zoil, Haggard, Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Paul (voice), Ruth Buggs
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Moses' Shot — Moses fires at Paul but hits Graeme instead. Characters: Graeme Willy, Paul (voice)
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Graeme's Revival — Paul revives Graeme despite the danger to himself. Characters: Paul (voice), Graeme Willy
Location: Devils Tower Base
Alien Exodus
The mothership arrives, crushing their pursuers, and Paul departs, leaving his human friends forever changed.
Key Events
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Graeme's Revival — Paul revives Graeme despite the danger to himself. Characters: Paul (voice), Graeme Willy
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Big Guy's Threat — Big Guy holds group at gunpoint after regaining consciousness. Characters: Graeme Willy, Ruth Buggs, Agent Zoil, Haggard, Paul (voice)
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Ship Crushes Big Guy — Landing transport ship crushes the Big Guy. Characters: Paul (voice), Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Ruth Buggs
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Paul's Departure — Paul says goodbye and offers Tara a new life. Characters: Paul (voice), Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Ruth Buggs
Location: Devils Tower Base
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Comic-Con Return — Two years later, friends promote their bestselling novel. Characters: Graeme Willy, Clive Gollings, Ruth Buggs
Location: Convention Center
For the past 60 years, a space-traveling smart-ass named Paul has been locked up in a top-secret military base, advising world leaders about his kind. But when he worries he’s outlived his usefulness and the dissection table is drawing uncomfortably close, Paul escapes on the first RV that passes by his compound in Area 51. Fortunately, it contains the two earthlings who are most likely to rescue and harbor an alien on the run.