Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Jealousy Beneath Thanksgiving
Gus's marital jealousy creates an atmosphere of strain during Thanksgiving. His retreat to the attic and handling of a pistol introduce the possibility of self-harm.
Key Events
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Thanksgiving Marital Strain — Gus becomes jealous of his wife's male coworker during Thanksgiving dinner. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Gus Retreats Upstairs — Gus withdraws to the attic and removes a pistol from a desk drawer. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Attic
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The Unseen Pistol — A family member follows Gus to the attic but does not see the pistol. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Attic
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Late Night Argument — Gus argues with his wife late at night, deepening the household tension. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Note and Will — Gus leaves a note and works on a will, then dismisses questions about them. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Downstairs room
Warnings in Plain Sight
Gus abandons the weekend trip, gives away a valued possession, and leaves clues involving a note and a will. The family begins to recognize that his behavior may be dangerous.
Key Events
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Weekend Trip Preparations — The family prepares for a weekend lodge trip, but Gus decides not to go. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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The Missing Gun — The pistol is missing, and Gus gives away an expensive fishing rod he values. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Attic
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Return From Departure — A family member leaves with his mother but returns after persuading her to continue without him. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Suicide Center Number — The note is discovered and contains the phone number for a suicide prevention center. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Harbor Job Loss — The family learns that Gus was fired from his harbor job a week earlier. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Boat harbor
A Search for Help
A visit to the Suicide Prevention Center produces practical warning signs but no direct intervention because Gus has not called. Rumors about the marriage further increase the pressure.
Key Events
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Counseling Center Visit — Bob hears a report about Gus and explains the center's limits while providing warning signs. Characters: Gus Stewart, Bob Cousins
Location: Suicide Prevention Center
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Rumors of Infidelity — A rumor suggests Gus's wife may be having an affair, intensifying the emotional crisis. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Bus
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Will and Photographs — Gus reviews his will and old photographs while refusing to discuss his feelings. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Failed Social Intervention — An attempt to have Gus invited out fails, leaving him increasingly isolated. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
The Last Attempt at Connection
Gus remains closed off while reviewing his will and photographs. A visit from someone from his past and a shared drink briefly soften the crisis.
Key Events
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Past Relationship Visit — A woman from Gus's past visits and talks with him about his condition. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Search for the Gun — A search for Gus's missing pistol is unsuccessful. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Attic
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Brief Emotional Opening — Gus shares drinks and finally agrees that his son need not visit a cousin. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
The Highway Crisis
A painful telephone call causes Gus to take his son toward the airport against his will. The confrontation on the highway ends with a rescue and Gus's promise not to leave him.
Key Events
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Distressing Lodge Call — A phone call confirms that Gus's wife will not return and is not alone at the lodge. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home
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Forced Airport Departure — Gus interrupts an attempted call for help, forces his son into the car, and drives toward the airport. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Stewart home and car
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Highway Promise — After a dangerous chase, Gus rescues his son and promises he will never leave him. Characters: Gus Stewart
Location: Highway
When Gus Stewart's wife announces that she wants to divorce him, he starts thinking about committing suicide. His 14-year-old son Alex notices this and desperately tries to prevent him from doing so and to give his father a reason to live.