Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Pilot Buried by Guilt
A wartime command decision causes six deaths and leaves the surviving pilot unable to fly. Years later, his guilt has damaged both his work and marriage.
Key Events
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Wartime Squadron Losses — A command decision causes six Royal Air Force squadron members to die during the Second World War.
Location: European war zone
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Burden of Guilt — The surviving pilot blames himself and develops depression and anxiety that prevent him from flying.
Location: Postwar Canada
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Civilian Displacement — Years later, the former pilot moves through many civilian jobs while struggling with his damaged confidence.
Location: Winnipeg, Manitoba
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Marriage in Crisis — The former pilot's marriage deteriorates as guilt and loss of purpose affect his family life.
Location: Winnipeg home
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The Departure Note — A note reveals that the wife has taken their young son and is leaving by air.
Location: Winnipeg home
The Marriage Takes Flight
The pilot discovers that his wife is leaving with their young son and races to the airport. His attempt to save the marriage fails, but he boards the same flight.
Key Events
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Race to the Airport — The desperate husband rushes to the airport to board the same flight as his departing family.
Location: Winnipeg Airport
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Last Plea for Marriage — He asks for one final chance, but his wife says she cannot love a man she does not respect.
Location: Airport terminal
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Flight 714 Departs — Cross-Canada Air Lines Flight 714 begins its journey toward Vancouver.
Location: Douglas DC-4
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Meal Service Begins — The stewardess offers passengers a choice of meat or fish during the meal service. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Passenger cabin
Illness at Thirty Thousand Feet
Meal service is followed by widespread sickness among passengers and crew. The pilot becomes incapacitated, leaving the aircraft dependent on an unwilling and inexperienced passenger.
Key Events
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Meal Service Begins — The stewardess offers passengers a choice of meat or fish during the meal service. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Passenger cabin
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Passengers Fall Ill — Several passengers and the co-pilot become sick after the meal, creating an emergency aboard the aircraft. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Passenger cabin
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Food Poisoning Identified — A doctor determines that the fish caused the illness affecting passengers and crew. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Passenger cabin
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Pilot Becomes Incapacitated — The pilot becomes seriously ill, activates the autopilot, and passes out.
Location: Aircraft cockpit
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Only Flying Experience — The stewardess determines that one passenger is the only person aboard with flying experience. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Passenger cabin
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Ten Years Grounded — The experienced passenger has not flown for ten years and has never piloted an aircraft of this size.
Location: Aircraft cabin
Fog Over the Rockies
Dense fog blocks possible landing sites and forces the flight toward Vancouver. A former superior provides emergency instruction while openly doubting the passenger's ability.
Key Events
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Fog Blocks Calgary — Dense fog prevents Flight 714 from landing at Calgary or other airports east of the Canadian Rockies.
Location: Airspace east of the Rockies
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Emergency Guidance Begins — A former wartime superior is summoned to help the inexperienced passenger learn the aircraft and prepare for landing.
Location: Vancouver Airport control area
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Distrust in the Cockpit — The former superior blames the passenger for wartime deaths and initially has no faith in his ability.
Location: Aircraft cockpit
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Radio Support Arrives — The passenger's wife joins him in the cockpit and handles radio communication during the emergency.
Location: Aircraft cockpit
The Landing Against Fear
Fog hides Vancouver and the aircraft is ordered to circle. The passenger chooses a dangerous immediate landing, saves the flight, and restores the respect lost through wartime guilt.
Key Events
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Vancouver Vanishes in Fog — Vancouver is covered by fog as the aircraft approaches, leaving landing conditions extremely dangerous.
Location: Vancouver approach
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Order to Circle — The former superior orders the aircraft to circle for hours in the hope that the fog will lift.
Location: Vancouver approach
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Decision to Land — The passenger decides to attempt an immediate landing because the sick passengers urgently need medical treatment.
Location: Vancouver approach
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Rough Emergency Landing — The aircraft makes a rough landing, but no passengers are injured. Characters: Stewardess Janet Turner
Location: Vancouver Airport runway
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Demons Conquered — The successful landing shows that the former pilot has overcome his fear and guilt about flying.
Location: Vancouver Airport
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Respect Restored — The former pilot regains the respect of both his wife and his former superior.
Location: Vancouver Airport