Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Criminal Second Chance
A recently released convict rejects Leo Dexter's bank-robbery proposal and hopes to pursue a legitimate business future. The rejected bank loan creates pressure that revives criminal ambitions.
Key Events
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Prison Release Approaches — A convict prepares to leave Sing Sing with Jug Martin. Characters: Jug Martin, Leo Dexter
Location: Sing Sing prison
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Leo Proposes A Robbery — Leo proposes robbing a bank before release. Characters: Jug Martin, Leo Dexter
Location: Sing Sing prison
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The Proposal Is Rejected — The released convict rejects Leo's robbery proposal. Characters: Leo Dexter
Location: Sing Sing prison
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Florida Business Dream — A dog racing track is envisioned as a legitimate business. Characters: Denny Costello
Location: Florida
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Bank Loan Rejected — The bank rejects the funds needed for the business plan.
Location: Bank
The Tunnel Beneath Commerce
The luggage shop is purchased next to the bank, and Jug Martin and Weepy Davis begin digging toward the vault. The store initially functions as cover for the robbery.
Key Events
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Luggage Shop Purchased — The luggage shop is purchased from Homer Bigelow. Characters: Homer Bigelow
Location: Luggage shop
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Tunnel Digging Begins — Jug and Weepy begin digging toward the bank vault. Characters: Jug Martin, Weepy Davis
Location: Luggage shop basement
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Jeff Stocks The Store — Jeff convinces Weepy to order dozens of luggage pieces. Characters: Jeff Randolph, Weepy Davis
Location: Luggage shop
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Denny Discovers The Scheme — Denny discovers the robbery plan beneath the store. Characters: Denny Costello
Location: Luggage shop
Sales Defeat The Scheme
Denny Costello discovers the robbery plan and works with Jeff Randolph on advertising gimmicks. Customer traffic makes the legitimate business profitable and forces the digging to stop.
Key Events
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Advertising Campaign Begins — Denny recruits Jeff to devise unusual advertising gimmicks. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph
Location: Luggage shop
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Customers Flood The Store — The advertising gimmicks bring a flood of customers. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph, Jug Martin, Weepy Davis
Location: Luggage shop
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Digging Must Stop — The noisy tunnel work stops as legitimate sales grow. Characters: Jug Martin, Weepy Davis, Jeff Randolph
Location: Luggage shop basement
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The Store Flourishes — The shop becomes profitable through legitimate sales. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph, Jug Martin, Weepy Davis
Location: Luggage shop
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Bank Offers To Buy — The neighboring bank offers to buy the store for expansion. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph
Location: Luggage shop
Leo Reclaims The Heist
The successful store attracts a purchase offer from the bank, but Leo learns that his original idea has been used. After escaping jail, he forces the group to resume the robbery.
Key Events
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Leo Learns The Truth — Leo learns that the robbery idea has been used without him. Characters: Leo Dexter
Location: Jail
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Leo Breaks Out — Leo escapes jail to take over the abandoned scheme. Characters: Leo Dexter
Location: Jail
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Christmas Heist Planned — Leo forces the group to plan a Christmas Eve vault attack. Characters: Leo Dexter, Jug Martin, Weepy Davis
Location: Luggage shop
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Homer Returns Nostalgically — Homer returns, nostalgic for his former store. Characters: Homer Bigelow
Location: Luggage shop
Fire And Redemption
Homer Bigelow's return and the burglar alarm disrupt the Christmas Eve dynamite plan. Leo is captured, the store burns, and the store owner is rescued before the story closes with romance and renewed business plans.
Key Events
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Homer Returns Nostalgically — Homer returns, nostalgic for his former store. Characters: Homer Bigelow
Location: Luggage shop
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Alarm Stops The Heist — Homer presses the alarm; Leo panics and reaches for his gun. Characters: Homer Bigelow, Leo Dexter
Location: Luggage shop
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Leo Is Caught — Leo tries to escape but is caught by the police. Characters: Leo Dexter
Location: Outside the luggage shop
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Fire Engulfs The Store — The store erupts in flames after the failed heist. Characters: Homer Bigelow
Location: Luggage shop
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Homer Is Rescued — The revived store owner is dragged safely outside. Characters: Homer Bigelow
Location: Outside the burning store
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Marriage Proposal Accepted — Denny accepts Jeff's marriage proposal. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph
Location: Luggage shop
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A New Store Planned — Plans are made to build the first store in a chain. Characters: Denny Costello, Jeff Randolph
Location: New store site