Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Executioner’s Promise
Gail confronts a condemned gang leader who denies the murder and promises to return. One year later, Miami fills with Spring Break visitors.
Key Events
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Execution Sentence — Gail confronts the condemned gang leader before his execution for murder. Characters: Gail
Location: Execution chamber
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Vow To Return — The condemned man proclaims innocence and vows to return before being executed. Characters: Gail
Location: Execution chamber
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One Year Later — A year passes before the Spring Break events begin in Miami.
Location: Florida
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Spring Break Begins — Spring Break brings a week of festivities and large crowds to Miami.
Location: Miami
A Killer Among The Crowds
Skip arrives in Miami while Gail works as a bartender. A mysterious biker begins killing people through an electrocution device connected to his motorcycle.
Key Events
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Gail Works The Bar — Gail works as a bartender during the Spring Break festivities. Characters: Gail
Location: A Miami bar
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Skip Arrives In Miami — Skip is among the football players attending the Spring Break celebration. Characters: Skip
Location: Miami
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Mysterious Biker Appears — A mysterious biker appears and begins dispatching people.
Location: Miami
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Electrocution Mechanism — The biker's motorcycle contains a lever and button-operated electrocution mechanism.
Location: Miami
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A Teammate Disappears — After Skip's teammate becomes a victim, Skip begins trying to locate him. Characters: Skip
Location: Miami
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Gail Joins The Search — Skip asks Gail for help, and they search together for the missing teammate. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Miami
The Hidden Cover-Up
Skip and Gail search for Skip's missing teammate and discover that Doc Willet and Strycher concealed the death. As more people die, they question whether the executed man has returned.
Key Events
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The Death Is Covered Up — Skip and Gail learn that Doc Willet and Strycher concealed the death. Characters: Skip, Gail, Doc Willet, Strycher
Location: Miami
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The Body Count Rises — More victims appear while Skip and Gail continue trying to understand the killings. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Miami
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A Return From The Dead — Skip and Gail question whether the executed gang leader has returned or another person is responsible. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Miami
Truth At The Tire Yard
Gail confronts the biker at a tire yard, where his identity and responsibility for the original murder are revealed. Skip arrives and helps Gail escape.
Key Events
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Tire Yard Confrontation — Gail confronts the mysterious biker at a local tire yard. Characters: Gail
Location: Local tire yard
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The Killer Is Unmasked — The confrontation reveals the biker's identity and his claimed moral purpose. Characters: Gail
Location: Local tire yard
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The Original Murder Confessed — The biker confesses responsibility for the murder that led to the execution. Characters: Gail
Location: Local tire yard
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Skip Enters The Fight — Skip arrives and fights off the biker, allowing him and Gail to escape. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Local tire yard
Electric Judgment
The biker pursues Skip and Gail but crashes into a stray tire. He falls onto an electric field and dies by the same method used on his victims.
Key Events
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Motorcycle Pursuit — Skip and Gail run while the biker mounts his motorcycle and pursues them. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Tire yard
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The Bike Hits A Tire — The pursuing motorcycle trips over a stray tire. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Local tire yard
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Electrocution In The Field — The biker falls onto an electric field and dies by electrocution. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Electric field near the tire yard
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Leaving Florida — The next day, Skip and Gail decide to leave Florida for Ohio. Characters: Skip, Gail
Location: Florida