Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Signals Behind The Curtain
A retired naval officer learns that a Soviet mole may be operating inside GCHQ. His son also reveals plans to leave the service and marry Cynthia Goodburn.
Key Events
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Remembrance Day Opening — A decorated retired naval officer appears among the Remembrance Day crowd.
Location: Whitehall
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GCHQ Security Crisis — A suspected Soviet mole triggers internal surveillance and suspicion at GCHQ.
Location: GCHQ
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Marriage Plans Revealed — The linguist tells his father that he plans to leave and marry Cynthia Goodburn. Characters: Cynthia Goodburn
Location: A London flat
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Intelligence Conversation Recorded — Bruce and another intelligence official secretly record a conversation. Characters: Bruce
Location: A British Intelligence room
The Dangerous Disclosure
The linguist announces his intention to expose illegal intelligence operations and contacts Bill Pickett. Soon afterward, he dies in a suspicious rooftop fall.
Key Events
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Business Threat Delivered — A former naval associate warns that indiscretion could destroy the father's business.
Location: A meeting place
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Illegal Operations Disclosed — The linguist says he intends to expose illegal operations within his department.
Location: A monitored meeting
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Reporter Contacted — After serious reflection, the linguist contacts investigative reporter Bill Pickett. Characters: Bill Pickett
Location: An undisclosed meeting place
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Rooftop Death — The linguist dies in a fall; authorities record the death as accidental.
Location: A rooftop
Clues Among The Dead
The father finds newspaper clippings linking Cynthia's former husband to espionage and another suspicious death. Bill Pickett is then killed in a staged traffic accident.
Key Events
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Flat Confrontation — Bill Pickett confronts the father, who refuses to comment. Characters: Bill Pickett
Location: The dead linguist's flat
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Suspicious Newspaper Clippings — Clippings connect Cynthia's supposedly suicidal husband to a convicted spy and another suspicious death. Characters: Cynthia Goodburn
Location: The dead linguist's flat
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Reporter Meets Father — The father meets Bill Pickett to discuss the information surrounding the death. Characters: Bill Pickett
Location: An undisclosed meeting place
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Staged Traffic Killing — Bill Pickett is killed in an elaborately staged traffic accident. Characters: Bill Pickett
Location: A roadway
The State's Hidden Plan
Mark provides a lead about the investigation into the dead linguist's loyalty. A drunken confession identifies the mole and exposes the role of hired enforcers.
Key Events
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Funeral Approach — At the funeral, Mark approaches the bereaved father. Characters: Mark
Location: A funeral
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Loyalty Question Exposed — Mark reveals that a naval associate had questioned the dead linguist's loyalty. Characters: Mark
Location: An undisclosed meeting place
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Drunken Confession — The father gets the associate drunk and extracts an admission about leaving a door open.
Location: A private meeting place
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Mole Identified — The confession identifies the mole as a senior intelligence figure.
Location: A private meeting place
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Country House Abduction — British Intelligence takes the father to a country house for an official confrontation. Characters: Lord
Location: A country house
Confession At Whitehall
Officials explain that the death served a deception against American intelligence and threaten the family. The father confronts the mole, obtains a confession, and survives a fatal gun struggle.
Key Events
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Country House Abduction — British Intelligence takes the father to a country house for an official confrontation. Characters: Lord
Location: A country house
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State Cover Story — Officials explain that the death protected a deception designed to mislead American intelligence. Characters: Lord
Location: A country house
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Family Threat Issued — The father is warned that public disclosure would endanger him, Cynthia, and her daughter. Characters: Lord, Cynthia Goodburn
Location: A country house
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Whitehall Residence Entry — The father reaches the suspected mole's residence and enters after being mistaken for a charity collector.
Location: A Whitehall residence
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Confession Demanded — Confronted with the facts, the suspected mole admits spying and writes a full confession.
Location: A Whitehall residence
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Gun Struggle — The suspected mole demands the confession back; a struggle causes the gun to fire.
Location: A Whitehall residence
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Return To Parade — The father leaves the confession as a supposed suicide note and rejoins the parade.
Location: Whitehall