Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
An Invention in Chicago
Charles Lang works in a factory and lives in Chicago during the 1934 World's Fair. He privately develops a machine that generates electricity from distilled water and seeks patent protection.
Key Events
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Depression-Era Chicago — Charles lives and works in Chicago during the 1934 World's Fair. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Chicago
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Factory Work — Charles works a menial factory job while pursuing invention outside work. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Factory
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Shared Apartment — Charles lives with his blind sister in an apartment. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Chicago apartment
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Water Engine Prototype — Charles designs a machine that creates electricity from distilled water. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Charles's apartment
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Patent Search — Charles searches the phone book for a lawyer who can protect his invention. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Chicago apartment
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Meeting Mason Gross — Charles shows Gross the machine and seeks legal protection for the design. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross
Location: Mason Gross's office
Lawyers With Hidden Motives
Charles contacts Mason Gross after finding his name in the phone book and demonstrates the machine. Gross brings in Lawrence Oberman, while their motives increasingly appear aligned against Charles.
Key Events
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Meeting Mason Gross — Charles shows Gross the machine and seeks legal protection for the design. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross
Location: Mason Gross's office
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Conflicting Motives — Gross's motives appear different from Charles's goal of protecting and sharing his invention. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross
Location: Mason Gross's office
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Oberman Joins Gross — Gross recruits Oberman to assist with the pressure placed on Charles. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
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Legal Pressure Begins — The two lawyers begin menacing Charles over control of the invention. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
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Corporate Threat Emerges — The lawyers' actions imply service to corporate interests threatened by the engine. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Chicago
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Charles Sees Exploitation — Charles realizes that the lawyers are taking advantage of him. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
The Inventor Is Silenced
Charles realizes that Gross and Oberman are exploiting him and trapping him. When he tries to contact a newspaper reporter, the lawyers use his sister as leverage.
Key Events
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Charles Sees Exploitation — Charles realizes that the lawyers are taking advantage of him. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
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Charles Is Trapped — By the time Charles understands the scheme, Gross and Oberman have him trapped. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
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Newspaper Appeal — Charles attempts to contact a newspaper reporter to tell the story. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Chicago
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Hostage Leverage — Gross and Oberman hold Charles's sister hostage to stop him from speaking publicly. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Charles's apartment
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Closing World's Fair — Charles reaches the World's Fair shortly before it closes for the night. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: World's Fair
A Last-Minute Scheme
At the closing World's Fair, Charles hears about a chain letter from a barker. The story gives him an idea while the lawyers continue demanding the engine plans.
Key Events
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Closing World's Fair — Charles reaches the World's Fair shortly before it closes for the night. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: World's Fair
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Barker's Chain Letter — A fair barker tells Charles about a chain letter he has just received. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: World's Fair
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A Desperate Idea — The chain letter gives Charles an idea while the lawyers continue seeking his plans. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: World's Fair
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Plans Withheld — The lawyers try to force Charles to surrender the plans, but he says he no longer has them. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
The Invention Survives
Charles claims he no longer has the plans, but a newspaper office scene reveals that he and his sister have been killed. The plans are then mailed to a young friend with mechanical aptitude.
Key Events
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Plans Withheld — The lawyers try to force Charles to surrender the plans, but he says he no longer has them. Characters: Charles Lang, Mason Gross, Lawrence Oberman
Location: Lawyers' office
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Newspaper Office Discovery — A scene in the reporter's office reveals that Charles and his sister have been killed. Characters: Charles Lang
Location: Newspaper reporter's office
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Plans Continue Forward — The water engine plans arrive by mail to a young family friend with mechanical aptitude.
Location: Mail delivery
In the 1930s, Charles Lang invents an engine that runs using water for fuel. But when he tries to get it patented, he is first offered a ridiculously low amount. When he refuses, he is suddenly several people are pressuring him to sell. The big oil companies don't want the competition. Now he has to try and keep them from getting his idea, and somehow get it published.