Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Mission Goes Wrong
A United Nations atomic rocket suffers an engine malfunction, and its booster explodes in an asteroid cluster. The resulting disturbance creates the central planetary threat.
Key Events
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Atomic Rocket Launch — The United Nations launches a crewed atomic rocket toward the Moon.
Location: Cape Shark
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Engine Malfunction — An engine malfunctions during the Moon mission, forcing the pilot to disengage the escape capsule.
Location: Space near Earth
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Booster Explosion — The abandoned atomic booster continues onward and explodes in the Delta asteroid cluster.
Location: Delta asteroid cluster
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Family Separation — The pilot stays to help while his homesick wife takes their son toward the United States.
Location: Cape Shark
Promises Under Pressure
A laboratory romance develops amid calculations of the explosion's effects. A private bet causes emotional damage when it is discovered.
Key Events
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The Six-Day Bet — Peter Leduq boasts that he can win a kiss from a co-worker within six days. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Intercom Discovery — The co-worker overhears Peter's boast through the intercom and rebuffs his initial advances. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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All-Night Calculations — Peter and his co-worker work through the night calculating the explosion's consequences. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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The Kiss — During the all-night work, Peter is allowed to deliver the promised kiss. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Bet Revealed — The co-worker remembers the bet and becomes heartbroken, unaware that Peter's feelings have become genuine. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
Earth Under Siege
The asteroids merge into a massive cluster and threaten Earth with tidal effects and worldwide disasters. Evacuations bring panic and disorder.
Key Events
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Asteroid Cluster Forms — The explosion dislodges asteroids and merges them into one enormous cluster heading toward Earth.
Location: Outer space
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Tidal Threat Identified — Scientists determine that the cluster will pass the Moon and cause destructive coastal tidal effects.
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Worldwide Disasters — Tidal waves, winds, firestorms, and earthquakes spread across the world as evacuations begin.
Location: Multiple regions
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Evacuation Panic — Mass evacuations produce panic and riots while populations flee the threatened coastal regions.
Location: Urban and coastal areas
The Last Defense
Scientists formulate a plan to fire every nuclear missile at the cluster. The calculator must remain cool while the climate crisis intensifies.
Key Events
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Calculation Breakdown — The stressed calculator operator breaks down, leaving Peter to take over the shift. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Peter Takes Over — Peter covers the calculations and reveals a supportive side while the crisis intensifies. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Missile Solution Proposed — The emergency plan calls for arming every missile on Earth and firing them at the asteroid cluster. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark command center
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Cooling System Required — Extreme climate changes make maximum air conditioning necessary for the calculator to operate.
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Family Returns — The family turns back after hearing the asteroid disaster announcement and hopes for reunion.
Location: Cape Shark
Sabotage Before Salvation
Randowsky sabotages the cooling system and blocks the plan with a gun. After a violent confrontation, the calculations resume and the missiles destroy the asteroid cluster.
Key Events
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Air Conditioning Sabotaged — Randowsky disables the air conditioning, stopping the firing calculations, and guards the equipment with a gun. Characters: Randowsky
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Randowsky's Conviction — Randowsky believes the asteroid disaster is divine punishment for humanity's use of nuclear missiles. Characters: Randowsky
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Laboratory Confrontation — Peter and two colleagues rush Randowsky while he uses a gun to prevent restoration of the cooling system. Characters: Peter Leduq, Randowsky
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Fatal Gunshot — Randowsky's resistance results in a colleague being fatally shot during the struggle. Characters: Peter Leduq, Randowsky
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Electrical Escape — After running out of ammunition, Randowsky flees and accidentally electrocutes himself. Characters: Peter Leduq, Randowsky
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Calculator Restarted — The cooling system and calculator are restored, allowing the final firing data to be completed. Characters: Peter Leduq
Location: Cape Shark laboratory
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Final Data Transmitted — The last firing data is transmitted to the missile forces around the world.
Location: Cape Shark command center
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Asteroid Cluster Destroyed — The missiles destroy the asteroid cluster and save Earth from the approaching catastrophe.
Location: Near Earth