Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Messages and Mourning
Frankie's urgent messages precede his death in Iraq. Fergus returns, confronts the condition of Frankie's body, and grieves alongside Rachel.
Key Events
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Frankie's Urgent Messages — Frankie leaves urgent messages saying something has gone badly wrong and they must talk. Characters: Frankie, Fergus
Location: Unspecified
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Frankie's Death in Iraq — Frankie dies in Iraq before Fergus returns to investigate. Characters: Frankie
Location: Iraq
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Fergus Returns — Fergus returns to face his grief after Frankie's death. Characters: Fergus
Location: Unspecified
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The Damaged Body — At the funeral, Fergus learns Frankie's body is badly damaged and incomplete. Characters: Fergus, Frankie
Location: Funeral
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Rachel's Grief — Rachel is devastated, while Fergus struggles with grief and guilt. Characters: Rachel, Fergus
Location: Unspecified
The Unrecorded Taxi Incident
At the memorial, Haynes praises Frankie, while Fergus and Rachel seek answers. Rachel reveals Frankie's unhappiness, his wish to return home, and his bitter dispute with Nelson over the taxi incident.
Key Events
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The Memorial Eulogy — Haynes praises Frankie as a courageous protector of aid workers and others in Baghdad. Characters: Haynes, Frankie
Location: Memorial
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Searching for Answers — Fergus and Rachel search for answers as strain grows between them. Characters: Fergus, Rachel
Location: Unspecified
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Frankie Wanted Home — Rachel says Frankie had been unhappy and wanted to come home. Characters: Rachel, Frankie
Location: Unspecified
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The Taxi Argument — Rachel recounts Frankie's bitter argument with Nelson over the taxi incident and Nelson's approval of killing an Iraqi. Characters: Frankie, Rachel
Location: Iraq
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The Omitted Incident — Fergus learns that the company records appear to omit the taxi incident. Characters: Fergus
Location: Iraq
Fergus's Buried Guilt
Fergus recalls joining Haynes's operation and the ambush in which he rescued a client but left his colleagues behind. His memories also include the destruction of an orchard and a woman's desperate response.
Key Events
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Nelson's Duty Detail — Fergus learns Nelson was on duty with Frankie and three unidentified Colombian men that day. Characters: Fergus, Frankie
Location: Iraq
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Fergus Joins Haynes — Fergus recalls leaving the army and joining Haynes's operation to build a security firm. Characters: Fergus, Haynes
Location: Unspecified
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The Ambush and Abandonment — After an ambush kills three of his men, Fergus rescues the client but leaves his colleagues behind. Characters: Fergus
Location: Unspecified
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The Orchard Memory — Fergus remembers a woman clinging to an orchard tree as soldiers destroyed it. Characters: Fergus
Location: Iraq
Walker Under Pressure
Walker explains that he fired Nelson and later rehired him after a threat involving the taxi incident. Fergus confronts Walker, questions his Afghanistan account, and suspects him of arranging Frankie's death.
Key Events
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Nelson's Reinstatement — Walker says he fired Nelson, then rehired him after Nelson threatened to expose the taxi incident. Characters: Walker
Location: Unspecified
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Confronting Walker — Fergus challenges Walker about threats and suspicious graffiti connected to Peggy's bar. Characters: Fergus, Walker
Location: Peggy's bar
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The Afghanistan Account — Walker says he was in Afghanistan when Frankie died and that Haynes sent him there. Characters: Fergus, Walker, Haynes, Frankie
Location: Afghanistan
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Fergus Suspects Walker — Fergus suspects Walker arranged Frankie's death and challenges his account. Characters: Fergus, Walker
Location: Unspecified
An Unresolved Admission
Pressed by Fergus, Walker says he did it. The available transcript ends before Walker explains how, leaving the truth unresolved.
Key Events
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Unexplained Admission — Under pressure, Walker says he did it, but the transcript cuts off before he explains how. Characters: Fergus, Walker
Location: Unspecified