Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Promises in the Evans Home
The Evans family celebrates Sophie's relationship with Alf while Margie expresses faith in love and marriage. The household initially treats romance as the foundation of a secure future.
Key Events
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Evans Household Celebration — The family celebrates Sophie's relationship with Alf and anticipates their future together. Characters: Margie Evans, Sophie, Alf, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Alf's Pool Hall Success — The family recalls Alf's championship and his use of prize money to buy a pool hall. Characters: Alf, Sophie, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Margie's Faith in Love — Margie insists that lasting marriages must be based on love. Characters: Margie Evans, Sophie, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Unexpected Return — Sophie and Alf return unexpectedly, disrupting the family's hopeful expectations. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
The Cost of Failure
Alf returns having lost the pool hall, his employment, and the couple's home. His conflict with Sophie exposes the difference between romantic promises and daily financial reality.
Key Events
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Unexpected Return — Sophie and Alf return unexpectedly, disrupting the family's hopeful expectations. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Pool Hall Lost — Alf reveals that he lost the pool hall after claiming he was framed during a match. Characters: Alf, Sophie, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Eviction Revealed — The family learns that Alf has been unemployed and that he and Sophie were evicted. Characters: Alf, Sophie, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Blame Between Spouses — Alf blames Sophie's criticism, while Sophie resents supporting his refusal to work. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans
Location: Evans household
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Evans Family Shelter — Sophie and Alf move in with the Evans family after their eviction. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
A Door to Ambition
Margie begins modeling at François's establishment and encounters Raymond through an expensive coat fitting. Raymond's attention and wealth begin to compete with her relationship with Jimmie.
Key Events
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Evans Family Shelter — Sophie and Alf move in with the Evans family after their eviction. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans, Pop Evans
Location: Evans household
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Margie Starts Modeling — Margie begins working as a model at François's establishment. Characters: Margie Evans, François
Location: François's establishment
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Coat Fitting — Margie poses in an expensive coat that Raymond intends to buy for Babsy. Characters: Margie Evans, François, Raymond Harding
Location: François's establishment
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Telephone With Jimmie — Margie speaks with Jimmie by telephone and agrees to meet him later. Characters: Margie Evans, Jimmie Slocum
Location: François's establishment
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Raymond's Attention — Raymond's attention and wealth make Margie reconsider her future with Jimmie. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding
Location: François's establishment
Divorce and Disillusionment
Sophie decides to divorce Alf, and Margie helps arrange legal assistance. Supporting Sophie causes Margie to reject the belief that love alone can sustain a marriage.
Key Events
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Margie Claims Ambition — Margie admits she is not truly a model yet but intends to become successful. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding
Location: François's establishment
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Sophie Chooses Divorce — Sophie decides to seek a divorce from Alf after their marriage collapses. Characters: Sophie, Alf, Margie Evans
Location: Evans household
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Attorney Meeting Arranged — Margie supports Sophie and helps arrange a meeting with an attorney. Characters: Margie Evans, Sophie
Location: Evans household
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Love Reconsidered — Margie tells Sophie that she will not marry for love alone and wants financial security. Characters: Margie Evans, Sophie
Location: Evans household
The Price of Security
Margie asks Raymond for money to fund Sophie's divorce and accepts the implication behind his suggested gift. The story closes with her choosing ambition and wealth while her fate remains unresolved.
Key Events
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Love Reconsidered — Margie tells Sophie that she will not marry for love alone and wants financial security. Characters: Margie Evans, Sophie
Location: Evans household
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Request for Two Hundred Dollars — Margie asks Raymond for two hundred dollars to help pay for Sophie's divorce. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding
Location: Raymond's gathering
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Raymond's Suggested Gift — Raymond suggests treating the money as a gift, implying an exchange beyond simple charity. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding
Location: Raymond's gathering
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Champagne at the Gathering — Margie accepts the implication behind Raymond's offer and drinks champagne at his gathering. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding
Location: Raymond's gathering
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Unresolved Ambition — Margie chooses ambition and wealth over former romantic ideals, while her ultimate fate remains unresolved. Characters: Margie Evans, Raymond Harding, Sophie, Jimmie Slocum
Location: Raymond's gathering
Working girl Margie Evans has decided there are two kinds of opportunities for a slum kid during the Depression: Those you make and those you take. Determined to help her family out of its financial bind, she is ready to do both after she shows up at the penthouse pool bash of a wealthy playboy.