Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Leaving The Carnival
A carnival high diver and his assistant wife leave their closing carnival for New York City. They hope to turn his diving skill into a larger career.
Key Events
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Carnival High Dive — A high diver performs at a carnival while his wife assists him.
Location: Carnival
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The Familiar Encouragement — Before every dive, the assistant calls up, "Okay, big boy!"
Location: Carnival
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Carnival Closure — The carnival closes, ending the couple's current livelihood.
Location: Carnival
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Journey To New York — The couple travels to New York City to seek success in show business.
Location: Road to New York City
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Searching For A Show — The high diver struggles to find a show that uses his diving skills.
Location: New York City
A Voice Finds The Stage
Unable to find suitable diving work, the husband’s wife sings in a nightclub. John Hammond helps persuade a producer to cast her in a Broadway musical.
Key Events
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Nightclub Singing Job — His wife takes a nightclub singing position to help them make ends meet.
Location: Nightclub
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Hammond Notices Her — John Hammond notices the singer and becomes interested in her. Characters: John Hammond
Location: Nightclub
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A Producer Is Convinced — John Hammond convinces a theatrical producer to cast the singer. Characters: John Hammond
Location: New York City
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Broadway Casting — The singer receives a role in an upcoming Broadway musical.
Location: Broadway musical
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Sudden Stage Success — Her Broadway career takes off and she becomes a major success.
Location: Broadway theater
Success Divides The Couple
Her Broadway success changes the balance of the marriage. Resentment, rumors, and John Hammond’s growing affection deepen the couple’s separation.
Key Events
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Growing Resentment — Her husband feels hurt and resentful because they live on her earnings.
Location: New York City
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The Couple Drifts Apart — The couple becomes emotionally distant as her career expands.
Location: New York City
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Hammond Grows Closer — John Hammond and the successful singer grow closer while her marriage weakens. Characters: John Hammond
Location: New York City
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Rumors Of An Affair — Rumors suggest an affair between John Hammond and the singer. Characters: John Hammond
Location: New York City
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Hammond Falls In Love — The avowed playboy John Hammond falls in love with the singer. Characters: John Hammond
Location: New York City
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The Engraved Bracelet — John Hammond gives the singer an engraved bracelet as a sign of affection. Characters: John Hammond
Location: New York City
The Bracelet And The Departure
John Hammond gives her an engraved bracelet, and her husband interprets it as evidence of betrayal. He leaves New York for a rural carnival.
Key Events
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Bracelet Discovered — Her husband finds the bracelet and suspects the worst.
Location: New York City
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Return To The Country — He leaves New York and returns to the country seeking carnival work.
Location: Country
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Determined Search — The singer learns where he has gone and determines to find him.
Location: Country
The Call Before The Dive
The abandoned husband loses his nerve before a rural carnival dive. His wife finds him, repeats their familiar encouragement, and helps restore his courage and their relationship.
Key Events
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New Carnival Employment — He obtains employment at a rural carnival.
Location: Rural carnival
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Lost Nerve Before Diving — Before his dive, he loses his nerve and prepares to climb down.
Location: Rural carnival
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The Familiar Call Returns — He hears the familiar voice below calling, "Okay, big boy!"
Location: Rural carnival
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Successful Final Dive — Seeing his wife below, he completes the dive successfully.
Location: Rural carnival
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Marriage Reunited — They reunite, and she vows to give up her career for their relationship.
Location: Rural carnival