Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Town Without a Mill
The troubled production is forced from New Hampshire to Waterford after misconduct by its leading man. The crew then discovers that the mill required by The Old Mill burned down decades earlier.
Key Events
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Production Banishment — The production is banished from New Hampshire after its leading man pursues underage girls.
Location: New Hampshire
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Move to Waterford — The crew moves to Waterford to finish shooting The Old Mill. Characters: Walt Price
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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The Mill Requirement — The production depends on the reported presence of a genuine mill in town. Characters: Walt Price
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Burned Mill Discovered — The crew learns that the town's mill burned down decades earlier. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont
The Impossible Rewrite
Walt depends on Joseph to rewrite the film around the missing location. Joseph's severe writer's block makes the production's already fragile plan more difficult.
Key Events
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Script Rewrite Ordered — Walt asks Joseph to alter the script because the original mill is unavailable. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Film production offices
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Writer's Block Deepens — Joseph struggles with an apparently bottomless reserve of angst-fueled writer's block. Characters: Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Local Inspiration — A local bookseller tries to provide Joseph with inspiration. Characters: Joseph Turner White
Location: Local bookstore
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Nude Scene Dispute — The leading lady refuses her contracted nude scene without an additional eight hundred thousand dollars.
Location: Film production
Local Friction
A contract dispute, an offense involving the historic firehouse, and the leading man's involvement with Carla create further disorder. The production increasingly clashes with the town and its own participants.
Key Events
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Nude Scene Dispute — The leading lady refuses her contracted nude scene without an additional eight hundred thousand dollars.
Location: Film production
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Firehouse Offense — The foreign cinematographer offends local residents by interfering with the historic firehouse.
Location: Historic firehouse
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Local Teen Romance — The leading man begins seeing Carla, a crafty local teenager.
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Production Pressure Builds — The missing mill, script crisis, cast dispute, and local offenses compound the production's problems. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Film production
The Witness Crisis
The leading man and Carla are injured in a car accident, while Joseph is the only witness. The accident deepens Joseph's emotional crisis and changes his connection with the local bookseller.
Key Events
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Car Accident — The leading man and Carla are injured in a car accident.
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Witness Revealed — Joseph is identified as the only witness to the accident. Characters: Joseph Turner White
Location: Accident site
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Joseph's Moral Quandary — Being the sole witness places Joseph in another intense emotional quandary. Characters: Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Emotional Connection — Joseph's emotional crisis leads him into the arms of a local bookseller. Characters: Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont
The Producer's Intervention
A powerful movie producer arrives to help Walt handle the aftermath. The accumulated production problems reach their crisis point and receive outside support.
Key Events
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Producer Arrives — A powerful movie producer comes to town to help Walt manage the aftermath. Characters: Walt Price
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Crisis Management — Walt and the production face the consequences of the accident and continuing conflicts. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Film production
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Script Adaptation Continues — Joseph's writing crisis remains tied to Walt's effort to keep the film moving. Characters: Joseph Turner White, Walt Price
Location: Film production offices
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Production Reaches Crisis — The accident and accumulated production disputes bring the film's problems to a head. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont
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Mess Receives Support — The powerful producer assists Walt with the resulting production mess. Characters: Walt Price, Joseph Turner White
Location: Waterford, Vermont