Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Sea Gives Warning
A fishing vessel is destroyed after an unseen creature attacks near Noyo. Jim later discovers a mutilated dog, establishing that a violent threat has reached the village.
Key Events
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Fishing Vessel Explosion — An unseen creature drags a boy underwater; a flare ignites gasoline and destroys the vessel. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Fishing vessel near Noyo
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Beach Corpse Discovery — Jim and his wife find their missing dog's dismembered corpse on the beach. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Beach near Noyo
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Jerry Pulled Under — Jerry is abruptly pulled underwater while swimming with Peggy. Characters: Jerry Potter, Peggy Larson
Location: Noyo beach
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Peggy Finds Jerry — Peggy discovers Jerry's mutilated corpse and realizes the danger is real. Characters: Jerry Potter, Peggy Larson
Location: Noyo beach
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Peggy Attacked — A humanoid drags Peggy across the sand and attacks her. Characters: Peggy Larson
Location: Beach near Noyo
Blood on the Beach
Jerry is killed while swimming, and Peggy becomes the only surviving witness of the early beach attacks. Further assaults spread fear while Jim's family is drawn into the danger.
Key Events
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Peggy Attacked — A humanoid drags Peggy across the sand and attacks her. Characters: Peggy Larson
Location: Beach near Noyo
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Campground Killing — A humanoid enters the campsite and kills Billy. Characters: Billy
Location: Beach campsite
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Survivor Trauma — Few witnesses survive, and Peggy is found alive but severely traumatized. Characters: Peggy Larson
Location: Noyo village
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Brother Attacked — An attack on Jim's brother gives Jim a personal reason to pursue the threat. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village
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Canco Cannery Plan — Canco announces plans to build a large cannery near Noyo. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village
The Mutation Revealed
Jim and Dr. Susan Drake investigate the attacks and connect them to Canco's growth hormone experiments. Their explanation traces the creatures back to escaped salmon and mutated fish.
Key Events
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Canco Cannery Plan — Canco announces plans to build a large cannery near Noyo. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village
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Growth Hormone Link — Jim and Dr. Drake connect the humanoids to hormone-treated salmon and mutated fish. Characters: Jim Hill, Dr. Susan Drake
Location: Canco laboratory
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Escaped Salmon Theory — The theory states that treated salmon escaped during a storm and were eaten by large fish. Characters: Dr. Susan Drake
Location: Canco laboratory
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Festival Begins — The annual festival begins while Jim and Dr. Drake are still confronting the threat. Characters: Jim Hill, Dr. Susan Drake
Location: Noyo village festival
Festival of Terror
The annual festival becomes a mass attack as humanoids overwhelm the village. Jim responds by developing a gasoline fire barrier to prevent their retreat.
Key Events
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Festival Begins — The annual festival begins while Jim and Dr. Drake are still confronting the threat. Characters: Jim Hill, Dr. Susan Drake
Location: Noyo village festival
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Humanoids Invade Festival — Many humanoids appear at the festival and attack the villagers. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village festival
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Festival Massacre — The creatures kill men and attack women throughout the festival. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village festival
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Carol's Home Attack — Two humanoids attack at Jim's home, and they are killed before Jim arrives. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Hill residence
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Gasoline Bay Plan — Jim plans to pump gasoline into the bay and ignite it to block the creatures' retreat. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo bay
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Bay Set Ablaze — Jim's fire barrier cuts off the humanoids' route back into the bay. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo bay
Peace Before the Birth
The bay fire appears to restore peace, but the threat survives through Peggy's pregnancy. At the laboratory, her monstrous offspring is born in a final shock.
Key Events
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Bay Set Ablaze — Jim's fire barrier cuts off the humanoids' route back into the bay. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo bay
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Morning Peace — The morning after the festival, the village appears to have returned to peace. Characters: Jim Hill
Location: Noyo village
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Peggy at the Laboratory — Jim asks about Dr. Drake and learns that she is coaching pregnant Peggy at the laboratory. Characters: Jim Hill, Dr. Susan Drake, Peggy Larson
Location: Canco laboratory
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Monstrous Birth — Peggy gives birth, and a monstrous offspring bursts from her womb. Characters: Dr. Susan Drake, Peggy Larson
Location: Canco laboratory