Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Moonbound Launch
The RX-M begins humanity's first expedition to the Moon. Mechanical failures, a runaway first stage, and a meteoroid storm immediately endanger the mission.
Key Events
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Launch from White Sands — Four men and one woman launch aboard humanity's first Moon expedition.
Location: White Sands Proving Ground
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First Stage Runs Away — The jettisoned first stage becomes runaway, threatening the spacecraft.
Location: Outer space
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Meteoroid Storm — The crew survives a meteoroid storm during the outward journey.
Location: Outer space
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Engines Suddenly Quit — The engines stop halfway to the Moon, forcing a fuel investigation.
Location: Outer space
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Fuel Ratios Recalculated — The crew recalculates fuel ratios and swaps the different fuels.
Location: RX-M interior
Beyond the Intended Course
Fuel adjustments restore the engines, but reignition sends the spacecraft beyond the Moon. The unconscious crew awakens to the unexpected approach of Mars.
Key Events
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Course Exceeds The Moon — After reignition, the spacecraft accelerates beyond the Moon on an uncontrolled heading.
Location: Outer space
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Crew Loses Consciousness — The increased acceleration causes everyone aboard to lose consciousness.
Location: RX-M interior
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Mars Appears Nearby — After awakening, the crew learns they traveled fifty million miles and approach Mars.
Location: RX-M interior
Ruins Beneath Red Skies
The spacecraft lands on Mars, where the explorers investigate ruins, a metal sculpture, and dangerous radiation. The evidence points to an ancient atomic war.
Key Events
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Red Mars Passage — The spacecraft safely passes through the Martian atmosphere.
Location: Martian atmosphere
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Landing on Mars — The spacecraft lands, and the explorers prepare for Mars's low oxygen levels.
Location: Martian surface
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Dead Civilization Discovered — The explorers find a metal face sculpture and distant modern ruins.
Location: Martian surface
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Radiation Reveals Atomic War — Dangerous readings indicate that an atomic war destroyed Mars's advanced civilization.
Location: Martian surface
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Cave Refuge Found — The explorers take refuge in a cave while observing primitive inhabitants nearby.
Location: Martian cave
The Martian Assault
Primitive descendants of the destroyed civilization approach the explorers and attack them with rocks and stone axes. Two explorers die and another is badly injured.
Key Events
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Blind Woman Screams — A blind woman screams after hearing the explorers' distorted mask voices.
Location: Martian surface
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Martian Attack Begins — Radiation-burned tribesmen attack with rocks and stone axes.
Location: Martian surface
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First Explorer Killed — A major is killed by a large rock thrown during the attack.
Location: Martian surface
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Second Explorer Killed — A doctor is killed by a stone axe as the attack continues.
Location: Martian surface
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Navigator Is Injured — The navigator is badly injured by another large rock.
Location: Martian surface
The Final Descent
Three survivors return to the RX-M but discover they lack fuel for a controlled Earth landing. Their warning reaches the base before the spacecraft descends toward Nova Scotia.
Key Events
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Survivors Reach RX-M — Three survivors, including the unconscious navigator, return to the spacecraft.
Location: RX-M landing site
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Fuel Cannot Support Landing — Near Earth, the survivors calculate that insufficient fuel prevents a controlled landing.
Location: RX-M interior
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Final Report to Base — A survivor contacts the base and reports the spacecraft's desperate condition.
Location: RX-M interior
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Uncontrolled Earth Descent — The spacecraft begins an uncontrolled descent toward Nova Scotia.
Location: Earth's atmosphere
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Mission Deaths Announced — The base announces that the entire crew has perished.
Location: Mission base
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Warning May Save Humanity — The mission leader says the expedition proved spaceflight theories and may save humanity.
Location: Mission base