Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The House Across The Way
A murder near 11 Crescent Drive establishes the hidden danger. Elizabeth arrives as governess and discovers a watch linked to the crime.
Key Events
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Basement Window Murder — An old homeless woman is murdered after seeing a light through the basement window.
Location: 11 Crescent Drive
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Witness Across The Way — A young witness sees the murder from the neighboring house.
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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Elizabeth Takes The Post — Elizabeth arrives at the Fielding house to begin work as governess. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, David Fielding
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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A Hostile Welcome — The boy rejects Elizabeth and declares that she is his enemy. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
Secrets Beneath The Cellar
Marian returns to sell the abandoned house while Elizabeth notices suspicious access to its cellars. David dismisses her fears, increasing her isolation.
Key Events
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The Watch In The Room — Elizabeth finds the murdered woman's watch in her dressing table. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: Elizabeth's bedroom
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The House Reopens — Marian returns to prepare the shuttered house for sale. Characters: Marian Tygarth
Location: 11 Crescent Drive
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Movement Beneath The House — Elizabeth suspects that someone is gaining access to the cellars. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: 11 Crescent Drive
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David Dismisses The Fear — Elizabeth tells David about the cellar, but he dismisses her concerns. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, David Fielding
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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A Caution Against Police — Elizabeth seeks advice and is told not to call the police. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: Dr. Evans's neighborhood
The Governess Returns
A mysterious maid appears at the Fielding house and is revealed to be Maxine. David attempts to remove her, but the tension ends with Maxine's murder.
Key Events
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The Nightly Intruder — Elizabeth learns that the boy lets a lurking man into the house at night. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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An Unexpected Maid — A new maid arrives despite the agency saying no one could be sent. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, Maxine
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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Maxine Revealed — Elizabeth realizes that the unexpected maid is Maxine. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, Maxine, David Fielding
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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David Orders Her Out — David tries to remove Maxine from the house. Characters: David Fielding, Maxine
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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Maxine Found Dead — Maxine is found murdered outside the empty house. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, Maxine
Location: Outside 11 Crescent Drive
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David Becomes The Suspect — David disappears, causing the police to treat him as the prime suspect. Characters: David Fielding, Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
The Widow's Warning
Marian explains that the killer of her husband is nearby and that she has been forced to clean an old crime scene. Her attempt to confront him ends in her death.
Key Events
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Marian Shares The Past — Marian tells Elizabeth that her husband's murderer is in the neighboring house. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, Marian Tygarth
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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The Old Crime Scene — Marian says she has been forced to clean traces of a twelve-year-old crime. Characters: Elizabeth Howard, Marian Tygarth
Location: 11 Crescent Drive
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Marian Faces The Killer — Marian goes next door intending to kill the unknown man but is killed instead. Characters: Marian Tygarth
Location: 11 Crescent Drive
The Hidden Killer
Elizabeth still suspects David and seeks help. David's arrival redirects the accusation, exposing the real killer and the jealousy behind the murders.
Key Events
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Elizabeth Seeks Help — Elizabeth continues to suspect David and calls for help. Characters: Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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The Killer Is Exposed — David arrives, accuses the supposed helper, and the true killer is revealed. Characters: David Fielding, Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
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The Motive Revealed — The killer's motive is revealed as jealousy over Marian and a long-hidden crime. Characters: David Fielding, Elizabeth Howard
Location: 10 Crescent Drive
David Fielding, who has recently lost his wife, moves into a new neighborhood under a cloud of suspicion. Many feel that his wife's death in a car crash was no accident. Elizabeth Howard, the governess he hires to look after his children, makes it her mission to find out the truth. When other murders seem to be following David to his new town, Elizabeth investigates with the help of David's son Barnaby.