Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Desperation and Deception
Robert's unemployment and competition addiction drive him to make impulsive criminal choices. His initial thefts escalate from a suit to a parrot, revealing his growing entitlement.
Key Events
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Introduction to Shabby Home — Establishes Robert's unemployment and dysfunctional family living situation. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Hatfield House
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Competition Addiction Revealed — Robert obsessively enters contests hoping to win a dream holiday. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
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Isle of Man Prize Reveal — Robert learns the holiday prize is actually the Isle of Man. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
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Victory Denial — Robert realizes he failed to win the competition and feels cheated. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
Escalating Crimes
Robert tracks down the elderly winners and kidnaps them to steal holiday tickets. The stakes rise as his criminal behavior becomes more calculated and dangerous.
Key Events
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Editor Office Heist — Robert storms the editor's office with a gun to steal a suit. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Editor's Office
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Ice Cream Shop Visit — Robert takes his family to an ice cream shop following the theft. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Ice Cream Shop
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Pet Shop Parrot Theft — Robert steals a parrot from a pet shop for Little Bob's birthday. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Pet Shop
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Tracking Elderly Winners — Robert locates the elderly couple who actually won the holiday. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Street
Unraveling Secrets
Police discover the crime while Angie uncovers Robert's infidelity. The family departs for the holiday on stolen tickets, masking underlying fractures.
Key Events
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Cellar Confinement — Robert ties up the winners in a cellar and steals their tickets. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Cellar
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Police Discovery — Police arrive and find the tied-up elderly winners. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Cellar
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Infidelity Exposure — Angie discovers Robert's affair with their next-door neighbour. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
Consequences and Redemption
Robert is caught, convicted, and imprisoned. Upon release, he discovers his family life has improved, suggesting an unexpected path to stability.
Key Events
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Holiday Departure — The family departs for the Isle of Man using the stolen tickets. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Airport
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Isle of Man Enjoyment — The family enjoys their holiday despite the illicit means of travel. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Isle of Man
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Police Pursuit — Authorities track Robert down during the holiday. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Isle of Man
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Court Conviction — Robert is formally convicted of his crimes and sentenced to prison. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Courtroom
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Prison Sentence — Robert serves his prison term away from his family. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Prison
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Prison Release — Robert is released from prison and returns to his community. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Prison Gates
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Family Reunion — Robert returns to find his family life has unexpectedly improved. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
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New Family Dynamic — The Martins settle into a healthier, more stable household routine. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
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Robert's Reflection — Robert observes the positive changes in his family post-incarceration. Characters: Robert Martin
Location: Home
Out of work, scrounger Robert Martin lives with his dysfunctional family - long suffering wife accident prone son and pregnant teenage daughter in a shabby house next door to a giant shopping center in the London suburbs. The Martins are the family from hell! Robert dreams if winning a dream holiday for his family, and when he fails to win yet another competition he flips, out tracks down the elderly winners, ties them up in the cellar and steals their tickets!