Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Sheriff at the Sweet Shop
Louie sings about his western past before a sheriff arrives looking for him over a murder from twenty years earlier. After hiding, Louie tells the boys that he was framed and reveals the gold map tattooed on his back.
Key Events
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Louie Sings in the Sweet Shop — Louie sings about his old-west days to the boys in the Sweet Shop. Characters: Louie, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Sweet Shop
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A Sheriff Arrives — A horseback visitor identifies himself as a sheriff looking for Louie over an old murder. Characters: Louie, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Sweet Shop
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Louie Hides from the Sheriff — Louie hides while the boys tell the sheriff they have never heard of him. Characters: Louie, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Back of the Sweet Shop
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Louie Tells His Past — Louie recounts living in Hangman's Hollow and discovering gold with Pete Briggs. Characters: Louie, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Sweet Shop
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Louie Describes the Framing — Louie says Blackjack McCoy murdered Pete, framed him, and drove him to flee to the city. Characters: Louie
Location: Sweet Shop
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The Map on Louie's Back — Louie reveals that the map to the hidden gold is tattooed on his back. Characters: Louie, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Sweet Shop
A Mission to Clear Louie's Name
The boys decide to travel west, clear Louie's name, and help deliver Pete's share of the gold to his daughter. They copy the map from Louie's back onto Sach's and set out.
Key Events
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The Boys Choose to Help — The boys plan to clear Louie's name and deliver Pete's share to his daughter. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Gabe, Louie
Location: Sweet Shop
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The Map Is Copied — The boys copy the map from Louie's back onto Sach's back before traveling west. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Louie
Location: Sweet Shop
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The Journey West Begins — The boys head west to clear Louie's name and pursue the gold. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Gabe
Location: Route west
The Map Exposes the Group
An ambush on the trail gives an attacker an accidental look at the map on Sach's back. Indian Joe carries word of the boys' presence to Blackjack, increasing the danger around their mission.
Key Events
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Ambushed on the Trail — The group is ambushed, and Sach unknowingly exposes the map to one of the attackers. Characters: Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Slip Mahoney
Location: Western trail
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Indian Joe Warns Blackjack — Indian Joe returns to town and alerts Blackjack that the boys are there. Characters: Indian Joe
Location: Western town
Gabe's Deception and Assistance
Gabe uses card tricks to win Blackjack's favor, then helps Slip and the boys. The group turns the advantage into a confrontation and captures Blackjack.
Key Events
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Gabe Wins Blackjack's Trust — Gabe uses card tricks to gain Blackjack's good graces. Characters: Gabe
Location: Western town
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Gabe Helps the Boys — Gabe uses his position to assist Slip and the boys. Characters: Gabe, Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Western town
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Blackjack Is Captured — The boys capture Blackjack as they move to clear Louie's name. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Gabe
Location: Western town
Confession and Awakening
Blackjack confesses the murder to the sheriff, apparently clearing Louie's name just as the group is about to collect the gold. Slip hits Sach, and the western adventure is revealed to have been Sach's dream.
Key Events
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A Murder Confession — Blackjack confesses the murder to the sheriff, clearing the way for Louie's vindication. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones, Gabe, Louie
Location: Western town
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The Dream Ends — Just before the group can collect the gold, Slip hits Sach and wakes him; the western adventure was Sach's dream. Characters: Slip Mahoney, Horace Debussy "Sach" Jones
Location: Unspecified