Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Desire To Learn
The intellectually disabled student attends night school, works at a bakery, and seeks ordinary companionship. His wish to improve creates the path toward the researchers' experiment.
Key Events
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Night School Learning — The intellectually disabled student attends night school and learns basic reading and writing.
Location: Boston night school
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Bakery Work — The student works as a janitor while coworkers exploit his disability for amusement.
Location: Bakery
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Playground Companionship — He enjoys playing with children at a neighborhood playground.
Location: Boston playground
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Research Introduction — The researchers investigate methods intended to increase human intelligence. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research facility
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Maze Comparison — The human subject repeatedly loses maze tests to the laboratory mouse. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research laboratory
The Intelligence Experiment
The researchers compare the human candidate with a laboratory mouse through aptitude tests and mazes. They select him for an experimental surgical procedure.
Key Events
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Human Subject Selected — The researchers select the student as the human candidate for surgery. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research laboratory
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Experimental Surgery — The selected subject undergoes the experimental intelligence-enhancing operation. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research facility
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Postoperative Frustration — After surgery, the subject initially loses to the laboratory mouse and becomes frustrated. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research laboratory
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Maze Victory — The subject eventually defeats the laboratory mouse as his intelligence begins to increase. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research laboratory
Success And Isolation
The operation eventually produces a dramatic intellectual increase. Success at work and in study instead brings dismissal, emotional confusion, and social isolation.
Key Events
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Machine Test — Coworkers expect the subject to fail, but he successfully operates a complex machine.
Location: Bakery
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Bakery Dismissal — The coworkers become frightened and persuade the bakery owners to fire him.
Location: Bakery
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Intelligence Surpasses Teacher — Continued learning causes the student's intelligence to surpass that of his teacher.
Location: Boston
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Rejected Declaration — His emotionally immature infatuation leads to a declaration of love and sharp rejection.
Location: Boston
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Return To Boston — After fleeing in rebellion, he returns to Boston and marriage is considered.
Location: Boston
The Warning Of Algernon
At the convention, the transformed subject confronts the researchers and learns that the laboratory mouse lost its enhancement and died. He realizes that the same decline may await him.
Key Events
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Convention Presentation — The researchers present the experiment and show footage of the original tests. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Scientific convention
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Convention Questioning — The transformed subject answers questions as an intellectual equal or superior. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Scientific convention
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Mouse Decline Revealed — He reveals that the enhanced laboratory mouse lost its intelligence and died. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Scientific convention
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Hallucinated Former Self — After leaving the convention, he sees hallucinations of his former self.
Location: City streets
Regression And Return
Attempts to preserve the intelligence fail, and the subject withdraws into depression. The story ends with his regression and return to the playground.
Key Events
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Failed Preservation Effort — He offers to help preserve his intelligence, but the combined effort fails. Characters: Dr. Anna Straus, Dr. Richard Nemur
Location: Research facility
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Withdrawal From Alice — He falls into depression and asks his teacher never to visit him again.
Location: Boston
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Return To Playground — He plays with children again after fully regressing to his original disability.
Location: Boston playground