Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Hilltop Deception
Baron and his men arrive at the Benson home under the false claim that they are checking security. They seize the family and reveal the house's value as a vantage point over the station.
Key Events
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The President's Train Stop — The president's train is scheduled to stop in the small town.
Location: Suddenly, California
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False Security Agents Arrive — Baron and his men claim to be checking security before the president arrives. Characters: John Baron, Ellen Benson, Peter 'Pop' Benson, Peter 'Pidge' Benson III
Location: Benson home
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The Home Becomes a Sniper Post — The hilltop home overlooks the station and is suited to a shot at the president. Characters: John Baron, Ellen Benson, Peter 'Pop' Benson, Peter 'Pidge' Benson III
Location: Benson home
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The Family Is Held Hostage — Baron reveals the deception and takes control of the house. Characters: John Baron, Ellen Benson, Peter 'Pop' Benson, Peter 'Pidge' Benson III
Location: Benson home
Hostages Under Threat
Shaw and Carney arrive, but Carney is killed and Shaw is wounded. Baron explains that he is being paid to kill the president, while Pop quietly directs Pidge to the revolver.
Key Events
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Carney Is Killed — Baron and his gangsters shoot Carney dead when he arrives with Shaw. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw, Secret Service Detail Chief Dan Carney
Location: Benson home
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Shaw's Arm Is Fractured — Baron wounds Shaw; Ellen later puts his fractured arm in a sling. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson
Location: Benson home
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Baron States His Price — Baron says he is paid to kill the president and money is his only motive. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson, Peter 'Pop' Benson, Peter 'Pidge' Benson III
Location: Benson home
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Pidge Finds the Revolver — Sent to find pills, Pidge finds Pop's loaded revolver and exchanges it for his cap gun. Characters: Peter 'Pop' Benson, Peter 'Pidge' Benson III
Location: Benson home
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The Station Scout Is Killed — A henchman sent to check the train schedule arouses police suspicion and dies in a shootout. Characters: John Baron
Location: Station area
Resistance Takes Shape
The hostages challenge Baron, and his remaining henchman begins to hesitate. Pop and Jud arrange an electrical trap around the rifle table as the assassination attempt draws nearer.
Key Events
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The Station Scout Is Killed — A henchman sent to check the train schedule arouses police suspicion and dies in a shootout. Characters: John Baron
Location: Station area
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Baron's Lack of Patriotism — The hostages appeal to patriotism, but Baron makes clear that he has none. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson, Peter 'Pop' Benson
Location: Benson home
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The Remaining Gunman Hesitates — Shaw challenges the risks of the assassination, and Baron's remaining henchman shows reluctance. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw
Location: Benson home
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Baron's Violent Past — Baron is revealed as a psychopath dismissed from the army for his love of killing. Characters: John Baron
Location: Benson home
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The Television Trap Is Set — Jud secretly connects the rifle table to the television's high-voltage output, and Pop spills water below it. Characters: Peter 'Pop' Benson
Location: Benson home
The Missed Shot
The trap electrocutes a henchman, but Baron shoots Jud and aims at the train. The train passes through, and Ellen and Shaw shoot Baron before the story turns to the aftermath and their tentative romance.
Key Events
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The Henchman Is Electrocuted — Baron's henchman touches the table first, is electrocuted, and reflexively fires the rifle. Characters: John Baron, Peter 'Pop' Benson
Location: Benson home
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Jud Is Mortally Wounded — Baron shoots Jud, disconnects the electrical trap, and takes aim at the tracks. Characters: John Baron
Location: Benson home
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The Train Passes Without Stopping — Baron aims at the arriving train, but it passes straight through the town. Characters: John Baron
Location: Benson home overlooking the tracks
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Ellen and Shaw Shoot Baron — Ellen shoots Baron in the abdomen, and Shaw shoots him again; Baron dies pleading for mercy. Characters: John Baron, Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson
Location: Benson home
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Shaw Confirms Jud's Death — Shaw tells Ellen that Jud died after the incident. Characters: Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson
Location: Outside the local hospital
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A Date and a Kiss — Shaw proposes meeting Ellen after church the next day, and they kiss. Characters: Sheriff Tod Shaw, Ellen Benson
Location: Outside the local hospital
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The Town's Name Returns — A driver asks for the town's name; Shaw answers, then reflects on the remark. Characters: Sheriff Tod Shaw
Location: Suddenly