Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Shadows of the Aftermath
The world lies in ruins after a nuclear exchange. A submarine crew finds temporary refuge in Melbourne, unaware that radioactive fallout is slowly approaching.
Key Events
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Nuclear Exchange Aftermath — World destroyed by nuclear war; Melbourne remains temporarily safe from fallout. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Submarine Arrival — Submarine crew seeks refuge in Melbourne, awaiting inevitable radiation arrival. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne Harbor
Echoes of the Dead
The crew investigates the source of a mysterious broadcast in Alaska and visits the destroyed ruins of San Francisco, confronting the reality of total annihilation.
Key Events
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Alaska Investigation — Crew investigates automated broadcast, finding only ruins and a dying family. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Alaska
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San Francisco Ruins — Crew visits destroyed hometown; a member abandons ship to die alone. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: San Francisco
The Inevitable Cloud
Radiation sickness spreads through Melbourne. Society fractures as citizens prepare for death, and the submarine crew faces their own terminal diagnoses.
Key Events
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Radiation Sickness Outbreak — Radiation reaches Melbourne; citizens line up for government-issued euthanasia. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne
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Social Unraveling — Anarchy and chaos erupt as the inevitability of doom becomes clear. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne Streets
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Final Family Moment — A family shares a final moment before taking their doses together. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Holmes Residence
Voyage to the End
The crew requests a final journey to their ruined hometown. The commander abandons his post to join them, while civilians face their final moments.
Key Events
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Final Family Moment — A family shares a final moment before taking their doses together. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Holmes Residence
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Scientist's Crash — A scientist crashes his car in a fiery death, symbolizing desperate escape. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Phillip Island Grand Prix Circuit
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Crew's Final Voyage Request — Sick crew members request a final voyage to San Francisco to die together. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne Submarine Base
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Commander's Decision — Commander agrees to the voyage, abandoning his post to be with his men. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne
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Submarine Departure — The Charleston sails away toward San Francisco, leaving Melbourne behind. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne Harbor
Quiet Acceptance
As the Charleston departs, the protagonist chooses to face the end alongside the commander, finding solace in shared humanity and final dignity.
Key Events
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Submarine Departure — The Charleston sails away toward San Francisco, leaving Melbourne behind. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Melbourne Harbor
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Final Union — Moira joins the commander after he returns, implying they will take their pills together. Characters: Moira Davidson
Location: Moira's Residence
The world has finally managed to blow itself up and only Australia has been spared from nuclear destruction and a gigantic wave of radiation is floating in on the breezes. One American sub located in the Pacific has survived and is met with disdain by the Australians. The calculations of Australia's most renowned scientist says the country is doomed. However, one of his rivals says that he is wrong. He believes that 1000 people can be relocated to the northern hemisphere, where his assumptions indicate the radiation levels may be lower. The American Captain is asked to take a mission to the north to determine which scientist is right.