Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Childhood of Numbers
Young Mona loves her father's stories, running, and mathematics. A disturbing birthday tale and the end of her parties precede her growing reliance on numbers for safety.
Key Events
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Mona Loves Stories and Numbers — As a child, Mona delights in her father's stories, running, and mathematics. Characters: Young Mona
Location: Family home
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The Birthday Story — Her father's tale describes a family sacrificing body parts rather than choosing one member to die. Characters: Young Mona
Location: Birthday party
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The Last Party — The birthday party becomes Mona's last, marking a rupture in her childhood. Characters: Young Mona
Location: Family home
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Numbers as Safety — Mona comes to rely on numbers as a source of order and safety. Characters: Mona Gray
Location: Family home
Fear at Home
Mona's father grows increasingly unwell, and his fixation on a circle-based cure adds to the household's confusion. Mona's trust in mathematical order develops alongside this instability.
Key Events
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Her Father's Decline — Her father's worsening condition and ineffective-seeming medications bring fear and confusion into the home. Characters: Mona Gray
Location: Family home
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Circles as a Cure — Her father becomes fixated on a supposed healing method involving circles. Characters: Mona Gray
Location: Family home
Lessons Beyond Arithmetic
Mona becomes a teacher and uses physical activities and examples from nature to make mathematics engaging. Her classroom efforts encounter students' grief and conflict, while she grows closer to Ben.
Key Events
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A Teacher of Mathematics — As a young woman, Mona becomes an elementary school math teacher. Characters: Mona Gray
Location: Classroom
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Numbers Made Physical — Mona asks students to form numbers with their bodies as part of an activity-based lesson. Characters: Mona Gray, Ann DiGanno, Danny O'Mazzi, Levan Beeze
Location: Classroom
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Numbers in Nature — Mona invites students to bring examples of numbers found in nature. Characters: Mona Gray, Ann DiGanno, Danny O'Mazzi, Levan Beeze
Location: Classroom
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Grief Enters Class — Mona's efforts to make math engaging meet the students' grief and conflicts; Ann's parents are separating. Characters: Mona Gray, Ann DiGanno
Location: Classroom
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Ben Joins Mona — Ben appreciates Mona's teaching and joins her playful search for an imagined runaway decimal point. Characters: Mona Gray, Ben Smith
Location: School
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The Invisible Sign — Mr. Jones explains that his invisible sign expressed resentment of hypocrisy, not an even-or-odd clue. Characters: Mona Gray, Mr. Jones
Location: Unspecified
The Classroom Crisis
Mona brings her father's artificial arm to class, where Elmer takes it and an argument erupts. Ann threatens Lisa with an ax, and Mona intervenes after learning of Ann's mother's death.
Key Events
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The Artificial Arm Lesson — Mona brings her father's artificial arm to class as an example for a lesson about numbers and materials. Characters: Mona Gray, Elmer Gravlaki, Ann DiGanno, Danny O'Mazzi, Levan Beeze
Location: Classroom
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The Class Erupts — Elmer takes the arm, the students argue, and Ann threatens Lisa with an ax. Characters: Mona Gray, Elmer Gravlaki, Ann DiGanno
Location: Classroom
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Mona Stops Ann — After learning Ann's mother has died, Mona tells Ann to put down the ax and tries to protect the students. Characters: Mona Gray, Ann DiGanno
Location: Classroom
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The Limits of Control — Mona confronts her responsibility as the only adult in the room and the limits of managing others' pain and disorder. Characters: Mona Gray
Location: Classroom