Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Bully And The Sailor
Davey Jones searches the desert for buried treasure before Hank Callahan forces him into a fight. An unnamed outsider intervenes, wounds Hank, and must flee town.
Key Events
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Davey Searches Desert Treasure — Davey Jones searches the desert for a buried treasure. Characters: Davey Jones
Location: Desert
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Hank Starts A Fight — Hank forces Davey into a fight. Characters: Hank Callahan, Davey Jones
Location: Town
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The Forced Brawl — The bully and the old sailor struggle in a public fight. Characters: Hank Callahan, Davey Jones
Location: Town
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Intervention In The Fight — An unnamed outsider intervenes on Davey's behalf. Characters: Hank Callahan, Davey Jones
Location: Town
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Hank Hits The Ground — The intervention leaves Hank knocked to the ground. Characters: Hank Callahan, Davey Jones
Location: Town
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Hank Draws His Weapon — Hank threatens the intervening outsider with a gun. Characters: Hank Callahan
Location: Town
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Hank Suffers A Shoulder Wound — Hank is shot in the shoulder after threatening his opponent. Characters: Hank Callahan
Location: Town
Escape Across The Canyon
A posse pursues the outsider after the shooting. He escapes by jumping his horse over a canyon, turning immediate danger into a new beginning.
Key Events
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The Fugitive Leaves Town — The shooter leaves town quickly after the violent encounter.
Location: Town
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The Posse Gives Chase — A posse pursues the fleeing outsider.
Location: Road Outside Town
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Horse Clears The Canyon — The fleeing rider escapes by jumping his horse over a canyon.
Location: Canyon
The Ranch In Peril
Mary Watkins mistakes the outsider for her missing brother and permits the impersonation. Her ranch faces foreclosure when an oil company demands payment within three days.
Key Events
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Mary Recognizes A Brother — Mary believes the outsider resembles her long-lost brother. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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A Brotherly Impersonation — The outsider pretends to be Mary's missing brother. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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The Ranch Faces Foreclosure — An oil company gives Mary three days to pay the mortgage on her land. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
The Cattle Disaster
A cattle sale is planned to raise the mortgage money. Armed interference causes a stampede, and the herd falls into a ravine.
Key Events
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Cattle Sale Plan — The outsider plans to sell Mary's cattle to raise the mortgage money. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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Armed Men Disrupt The Sale — Armed men interfere with the plan to sell the cattle. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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The Herd Stampedes — The armed men's actions cause the cattle herd to stampede. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Ranch Range
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Cattle Fall Into Ravine — The stampeding herd falls into a ravine, defeating the immediate plan. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Ravine
Debt Paid And Truth Revealed
The necessary money is ultimately gathered and used to pay the mortgage. The outsider reveals his identity, proposes to Mary, and Davey finds the treasure.
Key Events
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Mortgage Money Is Gathered — Despite the failed cattle plan, the required money is collected. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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The Mortgage Is Paid — The collected money is used to pay the ranch mortgage. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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Identity And Proposal Revealed — The outsider reveals his true identity and proposes to Mary, who accepts. Characters: Mary Watkins
Location: Mary's Ranch
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Davey Finds The Treasure — Davey Jones eventually discovers the hidden desert treasure. Characters: Davey Jones
Location: Desert