Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Old Feelings Resurface
Black reconnects with Sweet Lorraine after six months away. Blue turns the planned lunch into comic banter while Lorraine questions Black's unstable work and personal life.
Key Events
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Television Dispute — Bad Mouth Bessie argues over a faulty television allegedly sold by Blue. Characters: Bad Mouth Bessie, Blue
Location: Local neighborhood
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Bessie Trades Insults — The women exchange insults and jokes about dates, sex, and repairing the set. Characters: Bad Mouth Bessie
Location: Local neighborhood
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Black Calls Lorraine — Black calls Sweet Lorraine after six months of absence. Characters: Black, Sweet Lorraine, Blue
Location: Phone location
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Lunch Is Arranged — Sweet Lorraine happily agrees to meet Black for lunch. Characters: Black, Sweet Lorraine
Location: Telephone conversation
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Clothing Competition — Black and Blue turn the lunch clothing discussion into a comic competition. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Phone location
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Lunch By The Lake — Black meets Sweet Lorraine, who asks about his phone job and unstable life. Characters: Black, Sweet Lorraine
Location: Japanese restaurant by the lake
The Money Drop Unravels
T-Lay receives instructions about a hidden seventy-thousand-dollar drop. The secret leaks over the radio, transforming the transaction into a threatening street-wide treasure hunt.
Key Events
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Lunch By The Lake — Black meets Sweet Lorraine, who asks about his phone job and unstable life. Characters: Black, Sweet Lorraine
Location: Japanese restaurant by the lake
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Hidden Money Call — T-Lay receives instructions about a seventy-thousand-dollar drop in a locker. Characters: T-Lay
Location: Unknown phone location
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Radio Secret Exposed — The difficult instructions become public over the radio. Characters: T-Lay, Black, Blue
Location: Street communications network
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Treasure Hunt Begins — Arguments, fleeing vehicles, and threats turn the drop into a dangerous hunt. Characters: Black, Blue, T-Lay
Location: Streets
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Armed Street Confrontation — An armed confrontation erupts around a group of women. Characters: Black, Blue, T-Lay
Location: Street near a group of women
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Gun Malfunction — A gun malfunctions before shots are eventually fired. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Street near a group of women
Refuge And Revelations
After an armed confrontation, Black and Blue hide at Mr. Mimm's place. Sweet Lorraine learns about the robbery, Andrew's arrest, Black's lost job, and the larger communications threat.
Key Events
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Gun Malfunction — A gun malfunctions before shots are eventually fired. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Street near a group of women
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Refuge At Mr. Mimm's — Black and Blue hide at Mr. Mimm's place after the armed confrontation. Characters: Black, Blue, Mr. Mimm
Location: Mr. Mimm's place
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Lorraine Finds Them — Sweet Lorraine unexpectedly discovers Black and Blue hiding there. Characters: Black, Blue, Sweet Lorraine, Mr. Mimm
Location: Mr. Mimm's place
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Robbery Is Revealed — Sweet Lorraine learns that T-Lay robbed Lola Mae and Andrew was arrested. Characters: Black, Blue, Sweet Lorraine, T-Lay
Location: Mr. Mimm's place
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Black Loses His Job — Sweet Lorraine learns that Black has lost his job. Characters: Black, Blue, Sweet Lorraine
Location: Mr. Mimm's place
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Communications Threat — A government warning raises the stakes around the stolen communications technology. Characters: Black, Blue, Sweet Lorraine
Location: Mr. Mimm's place
Escape Into Greater Danger
Black and Blue flee from approaching sirens, accidentally hit Little Brother, and carry him toward concealment. Their attempt to negotiate with the phone sellers collapses when gunfire begins.
Key Events
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Frantic Vehicle Escape — Black and Blue flee while sirens approach. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Streets
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Little Brother Is Hit — Blue accidentally hits Little Brother with a vehicle during the escape. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Street
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Carrying Little Brother — Black and Blue carry Little Brother toward a hiding place as sirens approach. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Street near a hiding place
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Phone Sellers Return — Black and Blue encounter the men who originally sold them the phone. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Hiding place
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Desperate Negotiation — They offer extra service, a pager, and a piñata to avoid violence. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Hiding place
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Negotiation Collapses — The phone sellers fire a gun and force another chaotic confrontation. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Hiding place
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Danger Remains Unresolved — Black and Blue remain trapped in escalating danger as the excerpt ends. Characters: Black, Blue
Location: Hiding place
Two broke buddies feel lucky when they come upon a truckload of cellular phones and begin selling them out of the back of their van. Trouble arises though, when the phones develop faults. The two friends then not only have to deal with unsatisfied customers but also the FBI.