Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Summer at the Maudsleys
Leo arrives at the country home as Marcus's guest. He meets Marian and learns that Hugh is expected to visit.
Key Events
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Old Leo Revisits the Summer — Old Leo looks back on a summer whose painful memories have remained with him. Characters: Old Leo
Location: The place where he spent the summer of 1900
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Leo Arrives at the Maudsley Home — Leo comes to stay with his school friend Marcus for the summer. Characters: Old Leo, Marcus Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Marcus Boasts of Magic — Marcus welcomes Leo and boasts of supposed magical powers. Characters: Old Leo, Marcus Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Marian's Restlessness Emerges — Mrs. Maudsley indulges the boys as Leo notices Marian seems restless and unhappy. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Mrs. Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
Messages Between Two Worlds
Leo carries messages between Marian and Ted, becoming involved in their secret relationship. His curiosity about courtship grows even as he cannot grasp the risks.
Key Events
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Hugh Is Expected to Visit — The family expects Hugh, a titled friend, to stay at the house. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Hugh Trimingham
Location: Maudsley country home
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Leo Carries Their Messages — Leo finds himself carrying messages between Marian and Hugh. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Hugh Trimingham
Location: Maudsley country home
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Ted Enters the Secret — Leo becomes the go-between for Marian and the nearby farmer Ted. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Ted Burgess
Location: The Maudsley home and nearby farm
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Secret Notes Are Exchanged — Leo carries notes as Marian and Ted continue their hidden relationship. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Ted Burgess
Location: Between the Maudsley home and Ted's farm
An Engagement Without Consent
The family advances plans for Marian's engagement to Hugh, while Marian objects to having no say in her future. Leo's fear of Hugh complicates his role as messenger.
Key Events
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Leo Asks About Courtship — Curious about love, Leo asks Ted about spooning. Characters: Old Leo, Ted Burgess
Location: Ted's farm
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Family Plans Marian's Engagement — The family brings forward the announcement of Marian and Hugh's engagement. Characters: Marian Maudsley, Hugh Trimingham, Mrs. Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Marian Objects to the Plan — Marian objects to having no say in her own life. Characters: Marian Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Leo Hesitates to Help Marian — Leo hesitates when Marian asks him to take something to Ted, fearing Hugh's reaction. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Hugh Trimingham
Location: Maudsley country home
The Birthday and Its Aftermath
On his birthday, Leo imagines that his powers can control the adults' choices and outcomes. Arguments, a missed meeting, and Hugh's assistance become part of the memory Old Leo cannot escape.
Key Events
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Marian Rebukes Leo — Marian accuses Leo of refusing a simple favor, leaving him distressed. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Leo Tries to Command Events — On his birthday, Leo uses imagined powers to dictate what should happen to Marian, Ted, and Hugh. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Ted Burgess, Hugh Trimingham
Location: Maudsley country home
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Birthday Plans Exclude Leo — The household makes plans without giving Leo the choice he believes he deserves. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley
Location: Maudsley country home
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Marian Cannot Meet Ted — After an argument, Marian insists she cannot meet Ted at six. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Ted Burgess
Location: Maudsley country home
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Hugh Helps with the Note — Hugh permits Leo to go and arranges help after Leo admits he does not know the way. Characters: Old Leo, Marian Maudsley, Hugh Trimingham
Location: Maudsley country home
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Old Leo Faces the Memory — Old Leo's recollection returns to the burden of secrets he could not control. Characters: Old Leo
Location: The place where he spent the summer of 1900