Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Brief Escape
Two convicts escape and debate their plans, but an alarm ends the brief freedom. The story then shifts to the routines and tensions of Bensonatta prison.
Key Events
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Convicts Escape — Two convicts escape and argue about the car and their plans for life outside. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan
Location: Country prison
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Chicken Farm Dream — One convict dreams of starting a chicken farm as they discuss life beyond prison. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan
Location: Getaway route
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Alarm Ends Freedom — An alarm sounds, ending the brief escape sequence as the story shifts to prison life. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan
Location: Near the country prison
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Dan Preaches Reform — Dan presents himself as reformed and says crime does not pay. Characters: Dannemora Dan
Location: Religious gathering at Bensonatta
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Sermon Becomes Confrontation — Dan's praise of forgiveness turns into anger at the man he blames for leading him into crime. Characters: Dannemora Dan
Location: Religious gathering at Bensonatta
Prison Bonds Form
Steve arrives at Bensonatta and initially clashes with Saint Louis, but their hostility softens. Prison routines and messages between the quarters lead toward Steve and Judy's engagement.
Key Events
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Steve Arrives — Steve arrives at Bensonatta and clashes with Saint Louis. Characters: Steve Jordan, Saint Louis
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Baseball Reputation — Another inmate regards Saint Louis as a remarkable baseball player. Characters: Saint Louis
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Hostility Softens — Steve and Saint Louis gradually move from hostility toward companionship. Characters: Steve Jordan, Saint Louis
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Steve Shares His Past — Steve talks about his family and the home he might have had. Characters: Steve Jordan
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Prison Routines — The prisoners share jokes, schemes, and the routines of institutional life. Characters: Steve Jordan, Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Messages Cross Quarters — News and messages pass between the men's and women's quarters. Characters: Steve Jordan, Judy Fields
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Steve and Judy Engage — Steve and Judy become engaged, and he promises to build a respectable future with her. Characters: Steve Jordan, Judy Fields
Location: Bensonatta prison
Hope Behind Walls
Steve and Judy promise each other a respectable future after prison. The inmates' entertainment and shared friendships provide a hopeful pause before Steve's parole.
Key Events
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Steve and Judy Engage — Steve and Judy become engaged, and he promises to build a respectable future with her. Characters: Steve Jordan, Judy Fields
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Prison Entertainment — The inmates put on an entertainment performance for the prison community. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan, Steve Jordan
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Knife Throwing Act — Dan serves as the target in a knife-throwing performance. Characters: Dannemora Dan
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Steve Receives Parole — Steve is released on parole and returns to his hometown in New England. Characters: Steve Jordan
Location: Bensonatta prison
The Gun and the Warning
Outside prison, Steve faces pressure from Frosby and plans to shoot him. Saint Louis intervenes, takes the gun, and invokes his memories of death row to dissuade Steve.
Key Events
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Steve Receives Parole — Steve is released on parole and returns to his hometown in New England. Characters: Steve Jordan
Location: Bensonatta prison
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Frosby Coerces Steve — A criminal threat from Frosby pressures Steve and endangers his plans for a respectable life. Characters: Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Gun Temptation — Steve plans to shoot Frosby after the threat puts his future with Judy at risk. Characters: Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Saint Louis Intervenes — Saint Louis takes away Steve's gun and urges him to abandon violence. Characters: Saint Louis, Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Death Row Warning — Saint Louis recalls fear and grief he witnessed on death row to persuade Steve against violence. Characters: Saint Louis, Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
A Chance to Begin Again
Steve's friends help recover the bonds and leave before their presence can threaten his parole. Their farewell leaves Steve with the opportunity to honor his promise to Judy.
Key Events
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Death Row Warning — Saint Louis recalls fear and grief he witnessed on death row to persuade Steve against violence. Characters: Saint Louis, Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Bonds Secure A Start — Steve's prison friends help recover stolen bonds and ensure he has his mother's bonds to begin again. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan, Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Friends Depart — Saint Louis and Dan leave to avoid jeopardizing Steve's parole and ask him to pass a message to Judy. Characters: Saint Louis, Dannemora Dan, Steve Jordan
Location: Steve's hometown
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Promise Beyond Prison — Steve is left with the chance to keep his promise and build a life beyond prison. Characters: Steve Jordan, Judy Fields
Location: Steve's hometown