Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Desolate Destination Choice
The class rep selects a remote Sauerland location instead of major European cities. Students arrive at a country school hostel, setting an isolated tone for the trip. Initial excitement quickly fades as the desolate environment becomes apparent.
Key Events
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Destination Selection — Class rep chooses Sauerland over Rome. Characters: Tobi
Location: School Office
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Journey to Sauerland — Group travels to desolate region. Characters: Tobi
Location: Bus
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Hostel Check-In — Students register for remote stay. Characters: Tobi
Location: Reception
Secret Exposure & Retaliation
A newcomer publicly reveals a private detail about the class representative, triggering immediate embarrassment. The rep responds with physical retaliation, escalating personal tensions within the group. This incident fractures the initial team cohesion.
Key Events
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Room Assignment — Class settles into living quarters. Characters: Tobi
Location: Hallway
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Secret Exposure — Newcomer reveals private details publicly. Characters: Tobi
Location: Dormitory
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Public Humiliation — Embarrassing secret broadcasted to team. Characters: Tobi
Location: Common Area
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Physical Retaliation — Class rep strikes back physically. Characters: Tobi
Location: Dormitory
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Alliance Formation — Friends unite for revenge plot. Characters: Tobi
Location: Corridor
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Authority Challenge — Students question destination choice. Characters: Tobi
Location: Lobby
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Secret Aftermath — Personal fallout from public exposure. Characters: Tobi
Location: Bathroom
Revenge Campaign & Friction
Allies form a coordinated revenge campaign against the newcomer, shifting group dynamics toward hostility. Tensions peak during outdoor activities as the retaliation escalates. The trip's original purpose becomes secondary to interpersonal conflict.
Key Events
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Strategic Planning — Revenge tactics organized privately. Characters: Tobi
Location: Kitchen
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Revenge Campaign Launch — Coordinated retaliation begins openly. Characters: Tobi
Location: School Grounds
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Team Morale Shift — Group dynamics fracture over conflict. Characters: Tobi
Location: Dining Hall
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Escalating Tensions — Hostility peaks during outdoor activity. Characters: Tobi
Location: Forest Path
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Secret Aftermath — Personal fallout from public exposure. Characters: Tobi
Location: Bathroom
Journey Continuation & Aftermath
Despite ongoing friction, the group continues the scheduled itinerary. Attempts at reconciliation and reflection emerge as the trip nears its end. Students depart with altered perspectives, marking the conclusion of the school excursion.
Key Events
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Escalating Tensions — Hostility peaks during outdoor activity. Characters: Tobi
Location: Forest Path
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Trip Continuation — Journey proceeds despite friction. Characters: Tobi
Location: Bus
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Conflict Resolution Attempt — Efforts to restore group harmony. Characters: Tobi
Location: Common Room
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Final Group Photo — Class captures memory before departure. Characters: Tobi
Location: Hostel Steps
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Trip Reflection — Students review trip experiences. Characters: Tobi
Location: Train
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Journey Conclusion — Students return home changed. Characters: Tobi
Location: City Station
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Group Departure — Class splits up after trip ends. Characters: Tobi
Location: Platform
Not Rome, Paris or Florence - the 11c class trip goes to the “spectacular” Sauerland. Nessie, the class representative, is to blame for this; she chose the desolate destination. It's clear that something like this doesn't go without consequences: As soon as he arrives at the country school, the newcomer Erik reveals the secret about Nessie's "full" breasts in front of the entire team. The receipt comes promptly: Nessie gives him a bloody nose and starts a campaign of revenge with her friend Tobi...