Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Tailor Shop Disaster
A clerk suffers inept service conditions until Big Boyle storms into the tailor shop. The encounter destroys the shop and forces the clerk into flight.
Key Events
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Tailor Shop Employment — A clerk works under pressure in a men's tailor shop.
Location: Men's tailor shop
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Big Boyle Enters — Big Boyle storms into the shop to buy a new suit. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Men's tailor shop
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Failed Suit Service — Inept service escalates Big Boyle's anger during the purchase. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Men's tailor shop
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Shop Destroyed — Big Boyle destroys the shop while trying to throttle the clerk. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Men's tailor shop
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Desperate Flight — The clerk flees for his life after the shop attack.
Location: Street
A Dangerous Witness
After meeting Clara McCoy, the fleeing clerk hides in a hotel and accidentally witnesses an infidelity. Tom Sterling then keeps him close as a character witness for a valuable settlement suit.
Key Events
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Meeting Clara McCoy — The fleeing clerk stops and makes Clara McCoy's acquaintance. Characters: Clara McCoy
Location: Street
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Hotel Hiding Place — The clerk attempts to hide inside a hotel.
Location: Hotel
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Accidental Witness — The clerk accidentally witnesses the infidelity involving Tom Sterling's wife. Characters: Tom Sterling
Location: Hotel
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Settlement Stakes Revealed — Tom Sterling's one-hundred-thousand-dollar settlement suit is placed at stake. Characters: Tom Sterling
Location: Hotel
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Witness Kept Close — Tom Sterling keeps the clerk close as a character witness. Characters: Tom Sterling
Location: Hotel
Trouble At The Resort
The clerk and Tom Sterling retreat to a posh golf resort. The discovery that Clara McCoy and Big Boyle work there leads to brutal massage and electroshock treatment.
Key Events
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Golf Resort Retreat — The clerk and Tom Sterling lie low at a luxurious golf resort. Characters: Tom Sterling
Location: Posh golf resort
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Hidden Workers Discovered — It is discovered that Clara McCoy and Big Boyle work at the resort. Characters: Clara McCoy, Big Boyle
Location: Posh golf resort
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Brutal Massage — Big Boyle subjects the clerk to a brutal massage. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Golf resort treatment room
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Electroshock Treatment — Big Boyle follows the massage with electroshock treatments. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Golf resort treatment room
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Electric Chair Mishap — The clerk escapes when Big Boyle laughs and accidentally sits in his own electric chair. Characters: Big Boyle
Location: Golf resort treatment room
The Race To Court
The clerk oversleeps on the day of the divorce hearing and must travel by horseback. Clara McCoy and the jealous Big Boyle turn the journey into a dangerous stunt chase.
Key Events
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Overslept Hearing Day — The clerk oversleeps on the day of the important divorce hearing.
Location: Golf resort
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Horseback Dash — The clerk rides horseback toward the courthouse, while Clara McCoy follows. Characters: Clara McCoy
Location: Mountain trail
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Jealous Pursuit — Big Boyle follows Clara McCoy because he is jealous. Characters: Clara McCoy, Big Boyle
Location: Mountain trail
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Precipice Stunt Chase — The chase features characters dangling from precipices and swaying on teeter-totters. Characters: Clara McCoy, Big Boyle
Location: Mountain trail
Testimony From Above
The clerk parachutes onto the courthouse roof and reaches the hearing just in time. He delivers the vital testimony required for Tom Sterling's case.
Key Events
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Parachute Descent — The clerk parachutes onto the courthouse roof.
Location: Courthouse roof
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Vital Testimony Delivered — The clerk arrives just in time to deliver vital testimony. Characters: Tom Sterling
Location: Divorce courthouse