Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Actor Detective
Bill Martin believes his screen detective abilities apply to real investigations. His boasts irritate both the Los Angeles police and Mary Strand, whose affection is mixed with frustration.
Key Events
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Bill Plays A Detective — Bill acts as a film detective and believes his fictional skills are real. Characters: Bill Martin
Location: Film studio
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Real Skills Boasted — Bill boasts that he possesses genuine investigative abilities. Characters: Bill Martin
Location: Film studio
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Police Become Irritated — Bill's claims irritate the real detectives of the Los Angeles police. Characters: Bill Martin
Location: Los Angeles police setting
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Mary Challenges Bill — Mary's affection for Bill conflicts with her dislike of his arrogance. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand
Location: Film studio
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Poison Pen Appears — A mysterious killer called the Poison Pen decides to murder Bill. Characters: Bill Martin, Professor Herman
Location: Unspecified
A Killer Takes Aim
The Poison Pen decides to murder Bill because of annoyance with his last movie. Bill and Mary seek advice from Professor Herman without knowing his hidden identity.
Key Events
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Motive From His Film — The killer is annoyed by Bill's last movie. Characters: Bill Martin, Professor Herman
Location: Unspecified
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Seeking Herman's Advice — Bill and Mary consult amateur sleuth Professor Herman about the threat. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand, Professor Herman
Location: Professor Herman's place
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Hidden Killer Identity — The professor is secretly revealed to be the Poison Pen. Characters: Professor Herman
Location: Professor Herman's place
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Murder Goes Astray — The Poison Pen mistakenly kills Bill's film co-star Ralph Waring. Characters: Professor Herman, Ralph Waring
Location: Film studio
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Ralph Is Found Dead — Ralph's death confirms that the threat has become an actual murder case. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand, Ralph Waring
Location: Film studio
The Wrong Victim
The killer mistakenly murders Ralph Waring, Bill's co-star, and suspicion falls on a film stand-in. The case becomes more dangerous while Bill continues to overestimate himself.
Key Events
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Suspect Is Identified — A film stand-in becomes suspected of Ralph's murder. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand
Location: Los Angeles police setting
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Bill Remains Defiant — Bill continues acting as though he can solve the real case himself. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand
Location: Film studio
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Mary Plans Protection — Mary decides that confinement is the safest way to protect Bill. Characters: Mary Strand, Bill Martin
Location: Los Angeles police setting
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Bill Is Locked Up — Mary arranges for Bill to be locked up for his own protection. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand
Location: Police jail
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Herman Offers Bail — Bill persuades Professor Herman to bail him out of jail. Characters: Bill Martin, Professor Herman
Location: Police jail
Bail Into Danger
Mary has Bill locked up to protect him from the killer and from his own recklessness. Bill instead gets Professor Herman to bail him out, unknowingly returning to the killer's reach.
Key Events
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Bill Leaves Custody — Herman's intervention releases Bill despite Mary's protective plan. Characters: Bill Martin, Professor Herman
Location: Police jail
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Threat Closes In — Bill's release leaves him exposed to the killer he unknowingly trusts. Characters: Bill Martin, Professor Herman
Location: Unspecified
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Mary Mobilizes Help — Mary and the police move to rescue Bill in time. Characters: Mary Strand, Bill Martin
Location: Los Angeles police setting
Rescue In Time
Mary and the police come to Bill's rescue just in time. Their intervention brings the immediate danger surrounding Bill to a close.
Key Events
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Rescue Arrives — Mary and the police reach Bill before the danger can overtake him. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand, Professor Herman
Location: Unspecified
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Case Reaches Its End — The rescue concludes the immediate threat surrounding Bill and the Poison Pen case. Characters: Bill Martin, Mary Strand, Professor Herman
Location: Unspecified