Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Price of Remembering
Will depends on z to sleep, think, and recover memories. Johnny demands payment, while Michelle is left to help Will obtain more of the drug.
Key Events
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Will Depends on Z — Will uses z to escape and force himself to remember what he has seen. Characters: Will Parker
Location: Unspecified setting
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Johnny Demands Payment — Johnny arrives with Michelle and demands payment for an earlier z delivery. Characters: Will Parker, Johnny, Michelle
Location: Unspecified setting
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Michelle Offers Assistance — Johnny leaves Michelle to help Will obtain more z. Characters: Will Parker, Michelle, Johnny
Location: Unspecified setting
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Jay Explains Temporal Rerouting — Jay explains that z can reroute the mind to another point in time. Characters: Will Parker, Jay
Location: Unspecified setting
The Mind Leaves Time
Jay explains z's temporal mechanism and tests Will's brain activity. The experiment causes Will to move unpredictably between different days.
Key Events
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Brain Activation Experiment — Jay conducts an experiment to observe which parts of Will's brain activate. Characters: Will Parker, Jay
Location: Unspecified setting
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Temporal Slippage Begins — The drug causes Will to slip unpredictably between different days. Characters: Will Parker, Jay
Location: Unspecified setting
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Tomorrow Feels Present — Will experiences tomorrow as the present, making his memories contradictory. Characters: Will Parker
Location: Unspecified setting
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Red Sedan Questioning — Antonia questions Will about the red sedan and Emily Haswell's apparent murder. Characters: Will Parker, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Unspecified setting
Evidence from Tomorrow
Will's memories conflict with his statements as Antonia investigates the red sedan and Emily's apparent murder. A recording from 2054 presents a devastating accusation.
Key Events
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Contradictory Car Memory — Will insists he has not driven the car despite remembering doing so elsewhere in time. Characters: Will Parker, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Unspecified setting
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Future Recording Accuses Will — A recording from 2054 claims Will killed Michelle and Emily and hid their bodies. Characters: Will Parker, Antonia Rayburn, Michelle, Emily Haswell
Location: Unspecified setting
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Serial Killer Suspicion — Antonia increasingly suspects Will of being a serial killer. Characters: Will Parker, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Unspecified setting
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Two-Day Temporal Jump — A later dosage sends Will two days forward and intensifies his confusion. Characters: Will Parker
Location: Unspecified setting
The Manufactured Crime
A further dosage sends Will two days forward, while Johnny is killed and Michelle challenges Will's addiction. Will begins to suspect that the evidence has been constructed.
Key Events
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Will Suspects Manipulation — Will begins believing that people around him are manipulating events. Characters: Will Parker
Location: Unspecified setting
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Johnny Is Killed — Johnny is killed while Will remains caught in the escalating temporal confusion. Characters: Will Parker, Johnny
Location: Unspecified setting
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Michelle Confronts Will — Michelle confronts Will about his drug use, medication, and connection to David. Characters: Will Parker, Michelle
Location: Unspecified setting
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Evidence Appears Constructed — Will realizes that the evidence against him may have been deliberately constructed. Characters: Will Parker, David Languish
Location: Will's apartment
Awakening to the Truth
Gretchen urges Will to act through a possible temporal vision. In the hospital, authorities reveal Emily survived and David created much of the deception.
Key Events
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Gretchen's Temporal Appeal — Gretchen urges Will to remember future devastation and act rather than remain confused. Characters: Will Parker, Gretchen
Location: Memory or temporal vision
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Will Awakens in Hospital — Will awakens and learns that Emily survived and is expected to recover. Characters: Will Parker, Emily Haswell
Location: Hospital
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David's Deception Revealed — Authorities explain that David planted photographs and used confiscated z to inject Emily. Characters: Will Parker, David Languish, Emily Haswell, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Hospital
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David Held by Police — David is placed in police custody while authorities investigate the illegal laboratory. Characters: David Languish, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Police custody
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Illegal Laboratory Discovered — Police discover the illegal laboratory and continue searching for the manufacturer's body. Characters: Antonia Rayburn
Location: Illegal laboratory
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Will Cleared but Unresolved — Will is cleared of the central accusations, but addiction and altered perceptions remain unresolved. Characters: Will Parker, Antonia Rayburn
Location: Hospital