Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Wallflower At The Dance
Idalene attends a village dance under the influence of her mother's constant nagging. A lucky dance with Roy raises hopes that she may not be socially invisible.
Key Events
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Village Dance Begins — Idalene attends a village dance while believing herself to be a wallflower. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Roy Duncan, Prue Nickerson
Location: Village dance hall
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Idalene Feels Inadequate — Constant nagging has convinced Idalene that she is a constitutional wallflower. Characters: Idalene Nobbin
Location: Village dance hall
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Roy Notices Prue — Roy's attention is focused on the village belle, Prue. Characters: Roy Duncan, Prue Nickerson
Location: Village dance hall
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Idalene Gets Roy's Dance — By luck, Idalene gets a dance with the college football star. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Roy Duncan
Location: Village dance hall
The Invitation And Deception
Phil's misleading statement causes Roy to send an invitation to Idalene. At the prom, Roy secretly bribes students to fill her dance card.
Key Events
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Phil Misleads Roy — Phil tells Roy that Prue's name is Idalene Nobbin. Characters: Phil Larrabee, Roy Duncan, Prue Nickerson
Location: Village social setting
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Prom Invitation Sent — Roy sends an invitation to Idalene for a prom dance. Characters: Roy Duncan, Idalene Nobbin
Location: Village
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Idalene Prepares For Prom — Idalene and her mother appear at the promised dance. Characters: Idalene Nobbin
Location: Idalene's home
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Students Are Bribed — Roy bribes fellow students to fill Idalene's dance card. Characters: Roy Duncan, Idalene Nobbin
Location: Prom dance hall
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Bargaining Overheard — Idalene overhears part of the bargaining behind her dances. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Roy Duncan
Location: Prom dance hall
Humiliation On The Road
Idalene overhears the bargaining and realizes that the attention was manufactured. She flees, is struck by the consequences of her despair, and breaks both legs.
Key Events
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Idalene Flees The Dance — Hurt and humiliated, Idalene rushes away from the dance. Characters: Idalene Nobbin
Location: Outside the prom hall
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Automobile Accident — Idalene stumbles in front of a passing automobile and breaks both legs. Characters: Idalene Nobbin
Location: Road outside the dance hall
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Rescue By Pamela And Walt — Pamela and Walt pick up the injured Idalene. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Pamela Shiel, Walt Breen
Location: Roadside
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Idalene Confesses Despair — Idalene says she tried to kill herself and expects never to have love, home, or children. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Pamela Shiel, Walt Breen
Location: Recovery setting
A Promise Of Sunshine
Pamela and Walt rescue Idalene and hear her hopeless confession. They decide to help her recover emotionally as well as physically.
Key Events
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Idalene Confesses Despair — Idalene says she tried to kill herself and expects never to have love, home, or children. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Pamela Shiel, Walt Breen
Location: Recovery setting
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A Plan For Sunshine — Pamela and Walt decide to bring some sunshine into Idalene's life. Characters: Pamela Shiel, Walt Breen, Idalene Nobbin
Location: Recovery setting
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Idalene Recovers — Idalene recovers from the injuries to her legs. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Pamela Shiel, Walt Breen
Location: Recovery setting
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Pamela Coaches Idalene — Pamela coaches Idalene and dresses her in gowns. Characters: Pamela Shiel, Idalene Nobbin
Location: Pamela's social setting
Choosing Genuine Affection
Pamela coaches Idalene and gives a house party that transforms her social standing. Idalene rejects superficial attention in favor of Walt, accepting his proposal.
Key Events
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Pamela Coaches Idalene — Pamela coaches Idalene and dresses her in gowns. Characters: Pamela Shiel, Idalene Nobbin
Location: Pamela's social setting
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House Party Begins — Pamela gives a house party to introduce Idalene's changed social presence. Characters: Pamela Shiel, Idalene Nobbin, Prue Nickerson, Roy Duncan, Phil Larrabee
Location: House party
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Cubs Desert Prue — The college cubs leave Prue's circle and turn their attention to Idalene. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Prue Nickerson, Roy Duncan, Phil Larrabee
Location: House party
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Idalene Chooses Walt — Idalene prefers Walt's company over the attention of the college cubs. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Walt Breen
Location: House party
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Proposal And Acceptance — Walt proposes, Idalene accepts, and the story ends happily. Characters: Idalene Nobbin, Walt Breen
Location: House party