Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Pact Born From Despair
The protagonist lives under constant humiliation and emotional exploitation. An unwitting invocation brings Abargadon forward, leading to a bargain for her soul.
Key Events
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Bleak Daily Life — The protagonist endures a dreary routine involving an oppressive workplace and difficult personal surroundings.
Location: Dental office
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Workplace Reprimands — Her employer repeatedly reprimands her while she works as his secretary.
Location: Dental office
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Exploitative Analysis — Her analyst treats her primarily as a source of income.
Location: Analyst's office
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Unwitting Invocation — An unwitting invocation brings Abargadon into the protagonist's life. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Unnamed interior
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The Soul Bargain — Abargadon offers service until death in exchange for the protagonist's soul. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Unnamed interior
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Pact Is Signed — The protagonist accepts Abargadon's terms and signs the supernatural agreement. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Unnamed interior
The Wrong Soul Discovered
The pact briefly enables a seductive transformation, but Gabriel intervenes and identifies a mistaken target. He cancels the agreement and strips Abargadon of his power.
Key Events
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Pact Is Signed — The protagonist accepts Abargadon's terms and signs the supernatural agreement. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Unnamed interior
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A Seductive Transformation — The pact transforms the protagonist into a dreamlike figure who attempts to seduce her analyst. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Analyst's office
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Gabriel Intervenes — Gabriel intervenes and challenges the validity of Abargadon's agreement. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Unnamed supernatural space
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The Wrong Prey — Gabriel reveals that the intended prey was the protagonist's mother, not the protagonist. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Unnamed supernatural space
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Agreement Cancelled — Gabriel cancels the pact and removes Abargadon's supernatural power. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Unnamed supernatural space
A Trial Of Redemption
The protagonist becomes attracted to powerless Abargadon and asks Gabriel to spare him. Gabriel imposes a several-week test requiring Abargadon to commit no sin.
Key Events
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Growing Attraction — Despite the failed pact, the protagonist becomes attracted to Abargadon. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Unnamed interior
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A Plea For Abargadon — The protagonist pleads with Gabriel to give Abargadon a chance to save his soul. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Unnamed supernatural space
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The Moral Condition — Gabriel agrees conditionally: Abargadon must commit no sin for several weeks. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Unnamed supernatural space
Fire And Blood
The pair live in a seedy hotel until a fire puts them in mortal danger. Abargadon saves a child and then gives his blood to rescue the smoke-poisoned protagonist.
Key Events
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Life At The Hotel — The protagonist and Abargadon live together in a seedy hotel during the test period. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Seedy hotel
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Hotel Fire Erupts — A fire breaks out at the hotel, turning the moral test into an immediate physical crisis. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Seedy hotel
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Child Rescued — Abargadon saves a child during the hotel fire. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Burning hotel
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Smoke Poisoning — The protagonist is poisoned by smoke and approaches death inside the burning hotel. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Burning hotel
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Blood Transfusion — Abargadon gives his blood to save the dying protagonist. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Hotel aftermath
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Soul Restored — Gabriel decides to save Abargadon's soul and makes him human. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Hotel aftermath
The Bargain Reversed
Gabriel rewards Abargadon's sacrifice by making him human. Months later, a new demonic contract is negotiated, with love and longevity exchanged for his soul.
Key Events
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Soul Restored — Gabriel decides to save Abargadon's soul and makes him human. Characters: Abargadon, Gabriel
Location: Hotel aftermath
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Months Later — Months later, the former protagonist leads a pharmaceutical company after becoming a demon. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Pharmaceutical company
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Patent Theft — Abargadon, now mortal, robs the company to steal its patents. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Pharmaceutical company
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A New Contract — The demon offers Abargadon a contract in exchange for his soul. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Pharmaceutical company
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Favorable Negotiation — Using prior knowledge, Abargadon negotiates a favorable agreement. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Pharmaceutical company
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Love Against The Soul — The negotiated terms promise long life and carnal love in exchange for Abargadon's soul. Characters: Abargadon
Location: Pharmaceutical company