Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Hired Guardianship
Nick and Tim Diamond accept a lucrative job to guard a mysterious confectionery box delivered by a dwarf. Their initial compliance quickly shifts as curiosity takes over, leading them to break their promise and open the package.
Key Events
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Hired Guardianship — Brothers accept payment to guard a mysterious package. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: London Safehouse
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Dwarf's Arrival — A dwarf delivers the secret package to the brothers. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Safehouse Entrance
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Brothers' Betrayal — Nick and Tim break their promise and open the package. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Safehouse Interior
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Malteaser Revelation — They discover the package contains a box of Malteasers. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Safehouse Interior
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Criminal Alert — Nearly all crooks in England are alerted to the brothers' location. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: London Streets
Betrayal and Pursuit
Upon discovering the box contains Malteasers linked to a notorious criminal, the brothers become targets. The dwarf's death frames Tim, triggering a frantic police pursuit and forcing the brothers into hiding.
Key Events
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Criminal Alert — Nearly all crooks in England are alerted to the brothers' location. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: London Streets
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Dwarf's Death — The dwarf is found dead, and Tim is blamed for the murder. Characters: Tim Diamond
Location: Alleyway
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Police Pursuit — Brothers are wanted for murder and disturbance. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: London Streets
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Imprisonment — Nick and Tim spend time in jail together. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Prison Cell
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Alliance Formed — They join forces with old chief Inspector Boyle. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond, Boyle
Location: Prison Yard
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Criminal Threats — Criminals threaten the brothers while they are incarcerated. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Prison Corridor
Jailbreak and Alliances
Imprisoned and threatened by various criminal factions, the brothers meet Inspector Boyle. Their incarceration becomes a crucible for forming a new investigative alliance against the escalating threats.
Key Events
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Criminal Threats — Criminals threaten the brothers while they are incarcerated. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Prison Corridor
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Kidnapping Attempt — The brothers are nearly killed and kidnapped by crooks. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Transport Vehicle
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Concrete Trainers — Criminals give the brothers concrete trainers as a threat. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Safehouse
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Punk Bullying — The brothers are bullied by punk criminals. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Street Corner
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Crocodile Encounter — They are invited by women who keep crocodiles as pets. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Private Residence
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Mystery Deepens — The brothers realize the chocolate box hides a serious mystery. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Investigation Office
The Chocolate Mystery Solved
Navigating absurd dangers like concrete trainers and crocodile-keeping women, the brothers uncover the treasure connection. They ultimately confront the remaining criminals and resolve the case, cementing their detective legacy.
Key Events
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Mystery Deepens — The brothers realize the chocolate box hides a serious mystery. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Investigation Office
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Treasure Connection — They link the Malteasers to criminal Henry von Falkenberg. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: Archive Room
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Final Confrontation — The team faces the remaining crooks in a direct clash. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond, Boyle
Location: Criminal Hideout
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Case Resolution — The brothers successfully solve the tough crime. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond, Boyle
Location: Police Station
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Brothers' Triumph — Nick and Tim celebrate their success as a detective duo. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: London Rooftop
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Legacy Established — The Diamond Brothers are recognized for solving the impossible case. Characters: Nick Diamond, Tim Diamond
Location: City Streets
Thirteen-year-old Nick and his slightly dense older brother Herbert run the Diamond Private Detective Agency above Camden Town Tube Station in north-central London. When a master criminal called The Falcon dies, they come into possession of his box of chocolate Maltesers, which contains the secret key to a fabulous cache of diamonds. Can they unravel the mystery and avoid the clutches of seedy lowlifes Brenda Von Falkenberg, Gott and Himmell, The Fat Man and the dogmatic Chief Inspector Snape, all of whom want to find the swag first.