Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Restless Days In An Empty House
Zak and the boys occupy an unused family house while living without money or parental supervision. Their thefts, drinking, smoking, and discovery of a loaded gun establish a volatile atmosphere.
Key Events
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Boys Enter Empty House — Zak and his friends fool around inside an unused family house. Characters: Zak
Location: Empty family house
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Loaded Gun Discovered — The boys discover their grandfather's loaded gun and are warned not to play with it. Characters: Zak
Location: Empty family house
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Searching For Valuables — With almost no money, the boys search the house for anything valuable. Characters: Zak
Location: Empty family house
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Cellar Food Theft — The boys steal food from a neighbor's cellar while looking for ways to get by. Characters: Zak
Location: Neighbor's cellar
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Reckless Days — The boys drink, smoke, row, and search for distractions during their idle days. Characters: Zak
Location: River and surrounding area
Violence And A Possible Escape
Angel's beating of Zak's brother exposes the danger surrounding the boys, while their absent mother deepens their feeling of abandonment. Bœuf's rental operation appears to offer a practical route out of poverty.
Key Events
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Brother Beaten By Angel — Angel has beaten Zak's brother, leaving the boys frightened and angry. Characters: Zak, Angel
Location: Unspecified street
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Abandonment Deepens — Their mother is away and cannot collect them, intensifying the brothers' sense of abandonment. Characters: Zak
Location: Empty family house
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Bœuf Rents Properties — The boys learn that Bœuf rents properties for short cannabis-growing operations. Characters: Zak, Bœuf
Location: Empty family house
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House Rental Proposal — Zak and the boys consider offering their mostly unused holiday house to Bœuf for rent. Characters: Zak, Bœuf
Location: Empty holiday house
The Deal Takes Shape
The boys negotiate the use of their holiday house, discussing rent, locks, and a six-month absence. Their hopes of receiving money coexist with increasingly reckless gunplay and fantasies of escape.
Key Events
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Terms Of The Deal — They discuss rent, changing the locks, emptying the house, and staying away for six months. Characters: Zak, Bœuf
Location: Empty holiday house
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Waiting For Operations — The boys wait for Bœuf's operation to begin while expecting money from the arrangement. Characters: Zak, Bœuf
Location: Empty holiday house
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Gun Fired At Trees — The boys experiment with the gun by firing at trees and nearly hitting a duck. Characters: Zak
Location: Wooded area
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Dangerous Games Continue — They argue, play dangerous games, and investigate the abandoned house despite the risks. Characters: Zak
Location: Abandoned house
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Dream Of Spain — One boy imagines leaving for Spain to find work, money, sunshine, and freedom. Characters: Zak
Location: Riverside
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Plans Against Angel — The boys imagine confronting Angel together over the violence against their friend. Characters: Zak, Angel
Location: Empty family house
Expulsion Under Threat
Angel arrives with men and announces that the house belongs to Bœuf. The boys are given five minutes to leave and are threatened with death if they return.
Key Events
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Angel Claims The House — Angel arrives with men and declares that the house now belongs to Bœuf. Characters: Zak, Angel, Bœuf
Location: Empty holiday house
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Five Minute Eviction — Angel gives the boys five minutes to collect their belongings and threatens to kill them if they return. Characters: Zak, Angel
Location: Empty holiday house
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Forced Into Rain — The boys leave in cold rain, struggling to carry their soaked belongings. Characters: Zak
Location: Road outside the house
No Money, No Shelter
Cold rain and soaked belongings accompany the boys' forced departure. Their attempt to collect the rent fails, leaving them trapped in a more dangerous situation with Angel's threat unresolved.
Key Events
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Rent Payment Denied — The boys try unsuccessfully to obtain the rent owed to them from Bœuf. Characters: Zak, Bœuf
Location: Bœuf's place
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Trapped Without Shelter — With no money or shelter, the boys realize they are trapped while Angel's threat remains active. Characters: Zak, Angel, Bœuf
Location: Outside Bœuf's place