Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Life Losing Direction
Emily faces repeated professional rejection and a painful breakup. Her friend's departure and a shocking family revelation make her future feel increasingly unstable.
Key Events
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Rejected Manuscript — Emily's book is repeatedly rejected by publishers. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Publishers
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Frustrated Novelist — Emily struggles with frustration while pursuing her writing ambitions. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's home
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Mike Ends Relationship — Mike breaks up with Emily, intensifying her personal crisis. Characters: Emily Hall, Mike
Location: Town
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Friend Leaves Town — Emily's best friend packs up and moves to Mexico. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's home
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Father Revealed Alive — Emily learns that her supposedly dead father is alive and wants to meet her. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
Failure Under Pressure
Unable to find suitable work, Emily compares herself with successful friends and fears her upcoming reunion. Eccentric encounters add awkwardness to her downward spiral.
Key Events
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Father Revealed Alive — Emily learns that her supposedly dead father is alive and wants to meet her. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
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Unwanted Family News — The unexpected family revelation adds confusion to Emily's unstable life. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's home
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Job Search Fails — Emily cannot find a decent job while her life continues to deteriorate. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
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Friends Succeed — The success of Emily's friends deepens her sense of failure. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
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Reunion Anxiety — The approaching tenth high school reunion forces Emily to measure her unmet ambitions. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's home
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Eccentric Encounters — Emily crosses paths with several unusually eccentric people. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
The Darkest Imagination
Emily's frustration deepens into imagined suicide attempts designed to avoid pain and gore. Her fantasies reveal how completely she has lost confidence in her life.
Key Events
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Eccentric Encounters — Emily crosses paths with several unusually eccentric people. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
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Literary Frustration — An obnoxious literary agent represents another discouraging obstacle for Emily. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Town
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Suicide Fantasies — Emily imagines bizarre and ineffective ways to kill herself. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's imagination
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Search For No Pain — Emily rejects imagined methods that involve pain, gore, or guts. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Emily's imagination
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Hospital Volunteering — Emily is drawn into volunteer work at a local hospital. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Local hospital
A Door Into Service
Emily begins volunteering at a local hospital and visits sick and terminally ill patients. The work redirects her attention from self-destruction toward compassion.
Key Events
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Hospital Volunteering — Emily is drawn into volunteer work at a local hospital. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Local hospital
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Patient Visits Begin — Emily visits sick and terminally ill patients with her faithful dog. Characters: Emily Hall
Location: Local hospital
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Finch Rejects Visits — Mr. Finch resents Emily's repeated visits and prefers his solitary life. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Hospital room
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Persistent Compassion — Emily continues visiting Mr. Finch despite his negativity and resistance. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Hospital room
Finch Finds Meaning
Mr. Finch initially rejects Emily's visits, but her persistence gradually changes his view of the world. His support ultimately restores Emily's faith in her own talent.
Key Events
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Persistent Compassion — Emily continues visiting Mr. Finch despite his negativity and resistance. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Hospital room
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Finch Sees Beauty — Emily helps Mr. Finch recognize beauty and value in the world. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Hospital room
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Mutual Emotional Change — The relationship between Emily and Mr. Finch becomes a turning point for both characters. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Hospital room
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Faith In Talent Restored — Mr. Finch's support restores Emily's faith in her own talent. Characters: Emily Hall, Mr. Finch
Location: Local hospital
A young woman, struggling to become a novelist, has her life go into a tailspin. Her first novel is rejected, her non-committal boy friend decides to take a powder, her best friend moves to Mexico for an acting job, and her mother announces that her long presumed dead father is actually a hippie photographer who has come to town to meet her. Sinking into a depression at being a total failure at 28, she starts fantasizing about suicide. In her depths of despair she meets various eccentric characters including a chain-smoking Santa Claus and an obnoxious literary agent. But her belief in herself is only restored when she meets a patient in a hospital where she does volunteer work.