Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Surfing Against Expectations
Chicklet / Florence struggles with romance and expectations about femininity. Lars reassures her, while Kanaka objects to her entering the male surfers' group.
Key Events
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Eddie Pleads with Diane — Eddie declares his feelings to Diane; she rejects him and asks him to leave. Characters: Bettina / Diane
Location: Drive-in
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Chicklet Questions Romance — Chicklet / Florence struggles to understand the girls' interest in boys; Lars reassures her. Characters: Chicklet / Florence, Lars
Location: Not specified
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Resistance to Gender Expectations — Chicklet / Florence resists romance and the expectation that girls should not surf. Characters: Chicklet / Florence
Location: Not specified
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Confusing Identity Encounter — After a frightening encounter, she insists that her name is not Florence. Characters: Chicklet / Florence
Location: Not specified
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Kanaka Resists Her Entry — Chicklet / Florence returns for lessons; Kanaka objects to a girl joining the male surfers. Characters: Chicklet / Florence, Kanaka
Location: Surfing lessons
A House With a Past
Bettina's complaints about a science-fiction movie give way to a mystery prompted by a photograph. Her companions propose a slumber party and an attempt to drive away the supposed ghosts.
Key Events
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Bettina Complains About Film — Bettina, an actress, complains about the quality of a science-fiction movie. Characters: Bettina / Diane
Location: Not specified
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Photograph Raises a Mystery — A photograph leads Bettina's companions to a story about a family murdered in her house years earlier. Characters: Bettina / Diane
Location: Bettina's house
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Friends Propose a Seance — Bettina's companions propose a slumber party and an attempt to drive away the supposed ghosts. Characters: Bettina / Diane
Location: Bettina's house
Shifting Names and Selves
Chicklet / Florence adopts the name Anne and intimidates a young man before abruptly returning to her familiar self. Bettina disguises herself, and an incident involving Mrs. Forrest's flickering light becomes unsettling.
Key Events
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Anne Intimidates a Young Man — Chicklet / Florence insists her name is Anne, intimidates a young man, and rejects being pushed aside. Characters: Chicklet / Florence
Location: Not specified
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Return to Familiar Self — She abruptly returns to her gentler self and asks to resume surfing lessons. Characters: Chicklet / Florence
Location: Not specified
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Bettina Disguises Herself — Bettina disguises herself to observe ordinary people while her friends try to keep their outing inconspicuous. Characters: Bettina / Diane
Location: Not specified
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Flickering Light Turns Unsettling — Mrs. Forrest asks for help with a flickering light; someone behaves in a way that seems unlike her. Characters: Mrs. Forrest, Chicklet / Florence
Location: Not specified
The Luau Threat
The threads converge at the luau as Marvel Ann searches for Chicklet / Florence and warns her to leave. Chicklet / Florence appears confident and threatens anyone who tries to stop her; the supplied account ends before the confrontation is resolved.
Key Events
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Marvel Ann Seeks Chicklet — Marvel Ann arrives looking for Chicklet / Florence; Starcat says Chicklet is in a drink. Characters: Marvel Ann, Chicklet / Florence, Starcat
Location: Luau
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Glamorous Chicklet Appears — Chicklet / Florence appears glamorous and confident; Marvel Ann warns her that she should not be there. Characters: Chicklet / Florence, Marvel Ann
Location: Luau
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Threat at the Luau — Chicklet / Florence vows to become the life of the luau and threatens to kill anyone who stops her. Characters: Chicklet / Florence, Marvel Ann
Location: Luau