Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Funding the Mars Frontier
Dr. Zulkowski prepares testimony while the Mars Exploration Program may receive more funding. The discussion establishes scientific priorities and hopes for White House approval.
Key Events
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Funding Priorities Discussed — Officials discuss government funding and scientific priorities. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government planning setting
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Testimony Preparation — Dr. Zulkowski prepares testimony for a budget hearing. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government office
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Mars Funding Increase — The Mars Exploration Program may receive additional funding. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government planning setting
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New Structure Proposed — The additional money could support a new structure. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government planning setting
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White House Approval Hoped For — The participants hope the White House will approve the plan. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government planning setting
The Comet Draws Near
Scientists discuss a comet approaching Mars and await Dr. Sadoughian's report. Hubble images and a three-dimensional model indicate that the predicted path is closer than expected.
Key Events
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Comet Approaches Mars — The discussion turns to a comet approaching Mars. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific operations setting
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Complete Report Requested — Dr. Sadoughian is expected to provide a complete report. Characters: Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific operations setting
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Hubble Images Examined — Scientists examine clear Hubble images of the comet. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
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Three-Dimensional Model Created — The scientists use the images to create a three-dimensional model. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
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Orbit Appears Too Close — The predicted path is closer than originally anticipated. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
Orbit Beyond Explanation
New observations show that the comet has abruptly changed direction. The scientists call the shift impossible and urgently request Rover images while rotating the cameras.
Key Events
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Rover Photography Considered — The initial reaction is that the Rover can still take photographs. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific operations setting
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Hearings Kept Minimal — The scientists are advised to keep Senate hearings to a minimum. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski
Location: Government planning setting
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Comet Changes Course — New observations show that the comet has turned and shifted its orbit. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
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Impossible Orbital Shift — The scientists say such a change should be impossible unless the Sun shifted. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
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Rover Images Requested — The scientists immediately request the Rover images. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific operations setting
A Situation Is Declared
The new images suggest that the comet is a serious threat. An ordinary family morning is then interrupted by an alarmed announcement, while the supplied excerpt ends before any consequence or resolution.
Key Events
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Cameras Rotated — They order all cameras to be rotated to investigate the change. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific operations setting
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Alarming Images Revealed — The new images shock the scientists and suggest a serious threat. Characters: Dr. Zulkowski, Dr. Sadoughian
Location: Scientific analysis room
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Family Morning Begins — A parent and child argue about breakfast preparations.
Location: Family home
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Ride Request Refused — The child asks for a ride, but the parent refuses and suggests driving.
Location: Family home
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Household Alarm Interrupts — The domestic scene ends when an alarmed announcement reports a situation to the President.
Location: Family home and government communication channel