Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Diagnosis and Decision
Ray Waller receives a Multiple Sclerosis diagnosis, prompting the family to seek stability. Eve secures a new job while they decide to purchase a home with a pool instead of renting.
Key Events
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Family Diagnosis — Ray is diagnosed with Multiple Sclerosis, impacting family life. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Home
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Career Regrets — Ray reflects on missing his daughter's birth due to baseball. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Past
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Eve's Career — Eve secures a job at a prestigious school while finishing her degree. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: School
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House Hunting — Family chooses to buy a home with a pool instead of renting. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Real Estate
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Initial Move-In — The family settles into their new home with the pool. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: House
Healing and Investigation
Ray discovers the pool's natural water source and experiences significant health improvements. Simultaneously, Eve begins researching the pool's history and contacts the previous owner.
Key Events
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House Hunting — Family chooses to buy a home with a pool instead of renting. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Real Estate
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Pool Discovery — Ray finds the pool uses a natural water source. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Pool
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Healing Begins — Ray's MS symptoms improve after swimming. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Pool
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Eve's Investigation — Eve researches the pool's history and previous owner. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Archives
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Previous Owner Contact — Eve reaches out to the former homeowner for answers. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Phone
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Dark Truth Revealed — Owner confirms the pool demands a horrific sacrifice. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Phone
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First Swim — Ray takes his first swim in the natural water source. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Pool
Dark Revelations
Eve uncovers the pool's sinister past and learns about the horrific sacrifice it demands. The family begins experiencing supernatural forces and malevolence emanating from the water.
Key Events
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Dark Truth Revealed — Owner confirms the pool demands a horrific sacrifice. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Phone
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Toxic Substance — Toxic-looking substance is removed from the pipework. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Pipes
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Supernatural Signs — Family experiences malevolent forces from the pool. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: House
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Health Peak — Ray's physical condition reaches its best state. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Pool
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Sacrifice Warning — Eve learns the exact nature of the required sacrifice. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Home
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Pool Malevolence — The pool's supernatural presence intensifies around the house. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Pool
Supernatural Escalation
The pool's dark energy intensifies, directly threatening the household. Ray faces a critical choice between his restored health and the entity's deadly requirements.
Key Events
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Pool Malevolence — The pool's supernatural presence intensifies around the house. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Pool
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Family Strain — Tensions rise as Ray resists leaving the pool. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Living Room
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Dark Nature Confirmed — Eve verifies the pool's history of horrific sacrifices. Characters: Eve Waller
Location: Study
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Supernatural Escalation — Malevolent forces directly threaten the family's safety. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: House
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Healing vs Danger — Ray must choose between his health and the pool's dark demands. Characters: Ray Waller
Location: Pool
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Family Unity — The couple confronts the supernatural threat together. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Home
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Pool's True Cost — The family faces the ultimate consequence of the pool's bargain. Characters: Ray Waller, Eve Waller
Location: Pool
Forced into early retirement by a degenerative illness, former baseball player Ray Waller moves into a new house with his wife and two children. He hopes that the backyard swimming pool will be fun for the kids and provide physical therapy for himself. However, a dark secret from the home's past soon unleashes a malevolent force that drags the family into the depths of inescapable terror.