Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Meeting Across Worlds
Bobby, a failing Californian musician, meets Iris in a bar. They begin a relationship and continue together at Bobby's apartment.
Key Events
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Bobby Meets Iris — Bobby, a failing musician, meets Iris in a bar. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: A bar
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A Relationship Begins — Bobby and Iris begin a romantic relationship. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: A bar
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The Couple Goes Home — The new couple spends time together at Bobby's apartment. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Bobby's apartment
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Iris Hears Voices — Iris begins hearing things that other people cannot hear. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Bobby's apartment
Voices Behind Silence
Iris begins hearing things that others cannot hear. The couple investigates these unexplained voices near their home.
Key Events
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Unexplained Voices Persist — The unexplained voices become a concern for Bobby and Iris. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Bobby's apartment
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The Couple Investigates — Bobby and Iris investigate the source of the voices. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Near Bobby's apartment
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Alien Voices Identified — The voices are linked to a childlike race of aliens. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Near the underground bunker
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A UFO Crashed — The aliens arrived after their UFO crashed. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The crash site area
The Bunker Secret
Bobby and Iris discover that the voices come from a childlike alien race. The aliens arrived after their UFO crashed and are being held by the government.
Key Events
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Aliens Held by Government — The government is holding the childlike aliens after the crash. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: An underground bunker
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The Supposedly Abandoned Bunker — The aliens are held in a bunker described as supposedly abandoned. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: An underground bunker near Bobby's apartment
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A Hidden Government Operation — The bunker is revealed as a government holding site. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
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The Alien Trio — The government is holding a trio of childlike aliens. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
Experimentation Threat
The couple learns that a trio of aliens is confined in a supposedly abandoned underground bunker. The government plans experimentation and dissection.
Key Events
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Experimentation Planned — The government plans to use the aliens for experimentation. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
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Dissection Threatened — The government's plan includes dissecting the aliens. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
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Bobby and Iris Choose Action — Bobby and Iris decide that the aliens must be liberated. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Near the underground bunker
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A Liberation Plan Forms — The couple plans how to free the aliens from government custody. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Near the underground bunker
Freedom and Return
Bobby and Iris decide to liberate the aliens from the bunker. They then help the aliens pursue a return to their mothership.
Key Events
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The Bunker Is Entered — Bobby and Iris move toward the bunker holding the aliens. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
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The Aliens Are Liberated — The couple carries out its decision to liberate the trapped aliens. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The underground bunker
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A Return Journey Begins — Bobby and Iris help the aliens pursue a return to their mothership. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: Outside the underground bunker
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The Mothership Objective — The rescue mission culminates in the goal of returning the aliens to their mothership. Characters: Bobby Sinclair, Iris Longacre
Location: The aliens' departure point