Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Veteran Reenters Advertising
A returning veteran seeks work and reaches a chaotic advertising interview. A proposal involving Kay creates his first major opportunity.
Key Events
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Veteran Seeks Advertising Work — A returning veteran searches for advertising work and throws money from his hotel window.
Location: Hotel
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The Expensive Hand-Painted Tie — He spends most of his remaining money on a hand-painted tie before his interview.
Location: New York City
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Interview Interrupted by Evans — Evans's phone call disrupts the job interview and throws the agency into confusion. Characters: Evan Llewellyn Evans, Mr. Kimberly
Location: Kimberly Advertising Agency
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Kay Becomes Campaign Prospect — The agency executive proposes Kay as the socialite face of a Beautee Soap campaign. Characters: Kay Dorrance, Evan Llewellyn Evans
Location: New York City
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A Deceptive Charity Appointment — The advertising executive obtains a meeting with Kay by pretending to represent the Charity League. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Kay Dorrance's residence
Selling Dignity to Beautee
Kay is recruited for a Beautee Soap campaign, but the proposed image conflicts with a more dignified presentation. The successful radio commercial earns a job.
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Kay Accepts the Campaign — The meeting succeeds, and Kay agrees to participate in the Beautee Soap campaign. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Kay Dorrance's residence
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The Provocative Advertisement — The art director presents a provocative negligee concept for Kay's advertisement. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Photo studio
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A Dignified Portrait — The campaign is redirected toward Kay in an evening gown surrounded by her children. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Photo studio
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Evans Tests the New Commercial — Evans criticizes the changed advertisement but is impressed by the overnight radio commercial. Characters: Evan Llewellyn Evans, Mr. Kimberly
Location: Beautee Soap offices
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The Advertising Job Begins — Evans orders Kimberly to hire the returning advertising executive. Characters: Evan Llewellyn Evans, Mr. Kimberly
Location: Beautee Soap offices
Romance Under Commercial Pressure
A double date exposes Kimberly's past betrayal, while Jean's return threatens the new romance. A failed Connecticut getaway leaves Kay disappointed.
Key Events
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A Double Date Confession — A double date brings Kay and Kimberly together, and Kimberly drunkenly confesses his professional betrayal. Characters: Kay Dorrance, Mr. Kimberly
Location: New York City
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Jean Reappears at the Nightclub — Jean, a former flame, reappears and causes tension in Kay's developing romance. Characters: Kay Dorrance, Jean Ogilvie
Location: Nightclub
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The Failed Connecticut Escape — A planned romantic escape fails when the destination has changed ownership and the rooms share a connecting door. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Connecticut getaway
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Kay Leaves Disappointed — Upset by the circumstances, Kay leaves and feels disappointed by the romantic trip. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Connecticut getaway
The Radio Deal and Its Cost
Evans orders a variety show built around Buddy Hare. The deal is negotiated and developed, but legal complications lead to morally compromising pressure.
Key Events
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Evans Orders a Variety Show — Evans demands a new radio variety show featuring Buddy Hare. Characters: Evan Llewellyn Evans, Mr. Kimberly, Buddy Hare
Location: Beautee Soap offices
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The Train Negotiation — Jean helps negotiate Buddy Hare's deal at a lower price while traveling by train. Characters: Jean Ogilvie, Buddy Hare
Location: Evening train
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The Show Excludes Hare — The production team develops the show while excluding Hare because of his behavior and tired jokes. Characters: Buddy Hare
Location: Hollywood
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Kay and the Bungalow Reconciliation — After accepting Jean's dinner invitation, the advertising executive realizes he still loves Kay and reconciles with her. Characters: Kay Dorrance, Jean Ogilvie
Location: Hollywood bungalow
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Cruel Pressure Secures the Contract — A legal problem threatens the Buddy Hare contract, and cruel implied blackmail is used to secure the deal. Characters: Buddy Hare
Location: Hollywood
Success Without Submission
The completed proposal brings a final confrontation with Evans. The protagonist rejects degrading commercial behavior, and Kay supports a financially uncertain fresh start.
Key Events
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The Final Rejection of Groveling — The proposed show is presented, but the advertising executive confronts Evans and rejects success at the cost of dignity. Characters: Evan Llewellyn Evans, Mr. Kimberly
Location: New York meeting room
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A Fresh Start with Nothing — Kay accepts a postponed marriage and the need for financial rebuilding; the last pocket money is thrown into the street. Characters: Kay Dorrance
Location: Street outside the meeting
A World War II veteran wants to return to advertising on his own terms, but finds it difficult to be successful and maintain his integrity.