Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Desperate Pill Mill Robbery
A struggling Southern town provides the backdrop for a desperate pill mill robbery. Tre participates in the crime, and the stolen money creates immediate danger.
Key Events
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Addiction-Stricken Dixie Town — The story opens in a small town suffering from widespread addiction.
Location: A small town in Dixie
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Desperate Robbery Begins — A desperate family man robs a pill mill with his reckless brother-in-law, Tre. Characters: Tre
Location: A pill mill
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Pill Mill Score — The robbery produces stolen money that becomes the center of the ensuing conflict. Characters: Tre
Location: A pill mill
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Easy Score Turns Violent — The supposedly easy robbery takes a violent turn and creates immediate danger. Characters: Tre
Location: The pill mill
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Mafia Retaliation Alerted — The violent robbery alerts Clayton Minor, a revenge-seeking New Orleans mafia enforcer. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: New Orleans mafia territory
The Enforcer Arrives
The violent robbery alerts Clayton Minor, a New Orleans mafia enforcer. He comes to the town and demands that the stolen money be found.
Key Events
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Mafia Retaliation Alerted — The violent robbery alerts Clayton Minor, a revenge-seeking New Orleans mafia enforcer. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: New Orleans mafia territory
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Clayton Tracks The Money — Clayton comes to the town to recover the money stolen during the robbery. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: A small Dixie town
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Demand For Repayment — Clayton demands that the family man find the stolen money. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: An unnamed meeting place
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Tre Becomes A Warning — Clayton turns his attention to Tre while the robbery partner watches. Characters: Clayton Minor, Tre
Location: An unnamed meeting place
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Public Strangulation — Clayton strangles Tre in front of the family man as a violent warning. Characters: Clayton Minor, Tre
Location: An unnamed meeting place
Warnings And Impossible Orders
Clayton kills Tre in front of the robbery partner to enforce his demands. He then orders the murder of Ms. Whitney, an eyewitness.
Key Events
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Public Strangulation — Clayton strangles Tre in front of the family man as a violent warning. Characters: Clayton Minor, Tre
Location: An unnamed meeting place
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Eyewitness Targeted — Clayton identifies Ms. Whitney as an eyewitness who must be silenced. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: A threatened household
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Murder Order Issued — Clayton demands that the family man murder Ms. Whitney in her bed. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: A threatened household
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Forced Witness Silencing — The enforcer's order places the eyewitness's life under immediate threat. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: Ms. Whitney's bedroom
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Taken To The Boss — Clayton takes the family man to his mafia boss after demanding the money. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia boss's location
Betrayal Inside The Mafia
Clayton takes the family man to his boss and shoots him. Clayton then changes course and attacks the mafia clan instead of continuing to serve it.
Key Events
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Taken To The Boss — Clayton takes the family man to his mafia boss after demanding the money. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia boss's location
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Shelby Is Shot — Clayton shoots the family man in front of the mafia boss. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia boss's location
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Clayton Changes Sides — Clayton experiences a change of heart and turns against his own mafia clan. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia boss's location
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Clan Members Executed — Clayton shoots all members of the mafia clan. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia clan's location
A Brief Attempt At Redemption
Clayton recovers the stolen money and delivers it to the widow. His apparent act of restitution ends when an unknown shooter kills him outside the door.
Key Events
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Money Recovered — After attacking the clan, Clayton takes the stolen money. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: The mafia clan's location
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Money Delivered To Widow — Clayton brings the recovered money to the family man's widow. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: A widow's home
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Quiet Cigarette Outside — Clayton stands outside the door and prepares to smoke a cigarette. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: Outside the widow's door
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Clayton Is Shot — An unknown shooter hits Clayton in the head, killing him. Characters: Clayton Minor
Location: Outside the widow's door
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Casing Picked Up — Only an arm in a red shirt, identified as Bodie Davis's, picks up the bullet casing. Characters: Bodie Davis
Location: Outside the widow's door
A sheriff tries to keep the peace when a desperate family man violently robs a pill mill with his brother-in-law, alerting an enforcer for the New Orleans mafia.