Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Glimpse of Susan
Jeremy's solitary routines and devotion to cello establish his quiet world. He sees Susan practicing ballet and becomes too shy to ask her name.
Key Events
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Jeremy's Solitary Routine — Jeremy lives with busy parents and spends much of his time on his own. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Jeremy's Father, Jeremy's Mother
Location: New York City apartment
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A Serious Cello Student — Jeremy pursues musical greatness as a serious cello student. Characters: Jeremy Jones
Location: Performing-arts high school
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Susan Practices Ballet — Jeremy enters seeking chalk and sees Susan practicing ballet. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: Empty classroom
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Jeremy Forgets Her Name — They talk briefly, but Jeremy is too flustered to ask her name. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: School
The Recital Opens a Door
Ralph carries Jeremy's feelings to Susan, but Jeremy hesitates after seeing her with an older boy. Susan's response to Jeremy's cello recital encourages him to call and ask her out.
Key Events
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Ralph Intervenes — Ralph explains Jeremy's feelings to Susan, who tells Jeremy to call her. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins, Ralph Manzoni
Location: School
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Jeremy Hesitates — Jeremy decides not to call after seeing Susan walking with an older boy. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: School
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The Cello Recital — Susan hears Jeremy perform as a featured soloist and congratulates him. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: School recital
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Jeremy Calls Susan — Encouraged by Susan's praise, Jeremy calls and asks her out. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: Not specified
A Brief First Love
On their first date, Susan shares that her mother is dead and that she moved from Detroit with her father. Over the following weeks, the two grow close, profess their love, and become intimate.
Key Events
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Susan's Family News — Susan tells Jeremy her mother is dead and that she and her father moved from Detroit. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: First date
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Three Weeks Together — They walk to school together and spend time at the park and racetrack. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: New York City
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Jeremy Confides in Ralph — Jeremy tells Ralph that he is falling in love with Susan. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Ralph Manzoni
Location: Not specified
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Love in the Rain — While playing chess on a rainy afternoon, they profess their love and make love. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: Jeremy's room
The Sudden Departure
Susan learns that her father has accepted a better job in Detroit and plans to leave at once. Her appeal fails, and Jeremy finds little support when he tries to talk about losing her.
Key Events
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Return to Detroit — Susan's father accepts a better job in Detroit and says they will leave almost immediately. Characters: Susan Rollins, Susan's Father
Location: Susan's home
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Susan Appeals to Her Father — Susan says she is in love, but her father dismisses the short relationship as insufficient. Characters: Susan Rollins, Susan's Father
Location: Susan's home
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Jeremy Seeks Support — Jeremy tries to discuss his feelings with his father and Ralph, but neither is receptive. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Jeremy's Father, Ralph Manzoni
Location: Not specified
A Tearful Goodbye
Susan and Jeremy say goodbye at the airport. She departs, leaving Jeremy alone again.
Key Events
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Goodbye at the Airport — Jeremy and Susan say a tearful goodbye before she departs for Detroit. Characters: Jeremy Jones, Susan Rollins
Location: Airport
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Jeremy Alone Again — Susan's departure leaves Jeremy alone again. Characters: Jeremy Jones
Location: Not specified