Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Plan Under Suspicion
A rapidly spreading website promotion accompanies Valerie Gauthier and her associates' plan to scrutinize powerful people. Declan Patel hesitates over a commitment while Jake waits, before a gathering at Jarnac's home discovers a security breach.
Key Events
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Online Promotion Spreads — A website promotion spreads rapidly, drawing millions of hits as Valerie and associates prepare a plan. Characters: Valerie Gauthier
Location: Online
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Declan Hesitates — Declan hesitates over a major commitment while Jake waits for him. Characters: Declan Patel
Location: Not specified
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Gathering at Jarnac's Home — Jarnac hosts a private gathering attended by Spencer-Kraft and Ning Tang. Characters: Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft, Ning Tang
Location: Alain Jarnac's home
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Servers Are Hacked — The gathering learns that Jarnac's computers and servers have been hacked. Characters: Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft, Ning Tang
Location: Alain Jarnac's home
The Public Trial Begins
Jake and his allies seize Jarnac and other influential figures and broadcast their questioning online. Allegations about oil, regulation, water rights, derailments, and Blackhawk Security turn the broadcast into a public trial.
Key Events
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Security Suspicions Grow — The group discusses security breaches and grows suspicious about who is responsible. Characters: Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft, Ning Tang
Location: Alain Jarnac's home
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Influential Figures Seized — Jake and his allies take control of Jarnac and other influential figures. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft
Location: Not specified
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Captives Broadcast Online — Jake broadcasts the captives' words and actions and invites viewers to judge their guilt. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft
Location: Not specified
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Dealings Put on Trial — Questioning addresses oil, environmental regulations, water rights, and train derailments. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft
Location: Online broadcast
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Blackhawk Funding Alleged — Jake alleges that Jarnac's company funded Blackhawk Security, which Ning Tang fronts. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Ning Tang
Location: Online broadcast
Captives Under Pressure
Jarnac and Spencer-Kraft resist the accusations and demand basic necessities. The captives are deprived of water, and some struggle to breathe after a harmful substance is introduced.
Key Events
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Derailments and Water Rights Linked — Jake connects Blackhawk personnel to derailments and alleges Jarnac received valuable water rights in return. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Ning Tang
Location: Online broadcast
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Captives Resist Accusations — Jarnac and Spencer-Kraft deny or resist the accusations and demand food and water. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft
Location: Not specified
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Water Deprivation Escalates — The captives are deprived of water, and some struggle to breathe after a harmful substance is introduced. Characters: Jake De Long, Alain Jarnac, Priscila Spencer-Kraft
Location: Not specified
A Divided Confrontation
Jake rushes to respond when Ning appears to need help, while Little Abraham holds others back. Valerie arrives and is blamed; a dispute over a captured lieutenant leads to a fight, Valerie is badly hurt, and the provided excerpt ends without resolution.
Key Events
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Jake Rushes to Ning — As Ning appears to need help, Little Abraham holds others back and Jake rushes to respond. Characters: Jake De Long, Ning Tang, Little Abraham
Location: Not specified
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Valerie Arrives and Is Blamed — Valerie arrives and apologizes; Jake's companions blame her for choices that brought them into danger. Characters: Jake De Long, Valerie Gauthier, Little Abraham
Location: Not specified
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Fight Leaves Group Divided — After a captured lieutenant refuses to cooperate without release, a fight breaks out; Valerie is badly hurt and needs a hospital. Characters: Jake De Long, Valerie Gauthier, Little Abraham
Location: Not specified