Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Hilliard Home Seized
Glenn and his fellow escaped convicts invade a suburban home and hold the Hilliard family hostage. They wait for escape funds while Glenn threatens and torments the captives.
Key Events
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Three Convicts Escape — Glenn leads two fellow escaped convicts toward a place to hide. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Hal Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Unspecified
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A Home Is Selected — The fugitives invade a randomly selected suburban home. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Hal Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Indianapolis suburb
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The Hilliards Taken Hostage — The convicts hold four members of the Hilliard family hostage. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Daniel C. Hilliard, Eleanor 'Ellie' Hilliard, Cynthia 'Cindy' Hilliard, Ralph Hilliard, Hal Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Hilliard home
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Fugitives Await Escape Funds — The convicts wait for a package of funds sent by Glenn's girlfriend. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Hal Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Hilliard home
A Discovery in the Garage
Police begin a statewide manhunt as the hostage crisis continues. George Patterson notices Glenn's car, is forced to drive into the country, and is murdered by Kobish.
Key Events
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Statewide Manhunt Begins — Police organize a statewide search for the escaped convicts. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Hal Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Indianapolis and surrounding state
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Glenn Torments Captives — Glenn menaces and torments the Hilliards, threatening to kill them. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Daniel C. Hilliard, Eleanor 'Ellie' Hilliard, Cynthia 'Cindy' Hilliard, Ralph Hilliard
Location: Hilliard home
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Patterson Notices the Car — Garbage collector George Patterson notices Griffin's car in the garage. Characters: George Patterson, Glenn Griffin
Location: Hilliard home and garage
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Patterson Forced to Drive — Glenn forces Patterson to drive into the country. Characters: George Patterson, Glenn Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Road from the Hilliard home
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Kobish Murders Patterson — Kobish murders Patterson after the forced drive. Characters: George Patterson, Sam Kobish
Location: Country
The Fugitives Fracture
Terrified by the police response and the fugitives' conduct, Hal abandons the house. His attempted escape ends when he shoots a police officer and is struck and killed by a truck; Kobish is later ambushed.
Key Events
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Hal Loses His Nerve — Frightened by the police response and the fugitives' actions, Hal decides to leave. Characters: Hal Griffin, Glenn Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Hilliard home
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Hal Abandons the House — Hal leaves the house and his fellow convicts. Characters: Hal Griffin, Glenn Griffin, Sam Kobish
Location: Hilliard home
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Gunfire at the Phone Booth — While attempting to flee, Hal shoots a police officer. Characters: Hal Griffin
Location: Phone booth
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Hal Is Struck by a Truck — Hal is run over by a truck and killed while trying to escape. Characters: Hal Griffin
Location: Near the phone booth
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Kobish Ambushed — Police and FBI personnel ambush Kobish. Characters: Sam Kobish
Location: Unspecified
Daniel Turns the Tables
Daniel persuades law enforcement that a forced assault would put his family at risk. He tricks Glenn with an unloaded handgun, drives him outside, and Glenn is killed while trying to escape.
Key Events
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Police Assault Deemed Too Risky — Daniel convinces law enforcement that storming the home would endanger his family. Characters: Daniel C. Hilliard
Location: Near the Hilliard home
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Daniel Tricks Glenn — Daniel uses an unloaded handgun and Glenn's own weapon to force him outside. Characters: Daniel C. Hilliard, Glenn Griffin
Location: Hilliard home
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Glenn Makes a Break — Glenn throws the firearm at a police spotlight and tries to flee. Characters: Glenn Griffin
Location: Outside the Hilliard home
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Glenn Is Killed — Police machine-gun Glenn as he attempts to escape. Characters: Glenn Griffin, Daniel C. Hilliard
Location: Outside the Hilliard home