Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Detective Dream
Mary is introduced as a Catholic-school senior fascinated by mysteries and determined to become a police officer. Her ambition is connected to the memory of her slain father.
Key Events
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Mary Dreams of Police Work — Mary's ambition is shaped by her slain father's example and her desire to join the police. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
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Mystery Obsession Revealed — Mary's fascination with mysteries, noir, and detective magazines reinforces her investigative identity. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Catholic school
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Family Questions Her Ambition — Mary's ambition to become an officer is treated skeptically by her family. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
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Teenage Murders Surface — Mary learns about a serial killer targeting teenage girls, including several classmates. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
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Mary Starts Investigating — Mary launches an independent investigation into the serial-killer case. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
The Case Begins
Mary learns that a serial killer has targeted teenage girls, including some of her classmates. She begins investigating independently despite the danger.
Key Events
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Mary Starts Investigating — Mary launches an independent investigation into the serial-killer case. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
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Guinn Confronts Mary — Guinn objects to Mary's investigation and tries to keep her away from the field. Characters: Mary Giordano, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Police department
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Guinn Questions Her Ability — Guinn expresses concern for Mary's safety and doubts that she has what it takes to be a cop. Characters: Mary Giordano, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Police department
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Mary Seeks Police Assistance — Mary enlists police cadet Tony Campbell to help investigate the murderer. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Police department
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The Investigation Gains Momentum — Mary and Tony work together to pursue clues surrounding the teenage victims. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Burlingame, California
Trust and Investigation
Guinn attempts to keep Mary away from the case, while Mary recruits Tony for investigative help. Their cooperation becomes increasingly personal and romantic.
Key Events
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The Investigation Gains Momentum — Mary and Tony work together to pursue clues surrounding the teenage victims. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Burlingame, California
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Mary and Tony Grow Closer — Their shared investigation gradually develops into romantic feelings. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Burlingame, California
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The Case Tightens — Mary and Tony continue pursuing the killer while Guinn remains involved and wary of Mary's actions. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Police department
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Tony's Identity Is Questioned — The investigation reaches the hidden truth behind Tony Campbell's identity. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Burlingame, California
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Tony's Alias Is Exposed — Tony Campbell is revealed to be an alias rather than his real identity. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown investigation location
The Hidden Killer
Tony's use of an alias is exposed, and he is identified as the murderer Mary and Guinn are seeking. The apparent partnership collapses into deadly conflict.
Key Events
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Tony's Alias Is Exposed — Tony Campbell is revealed to be an alias rather than his real identity. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown investigation location
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The Ally Is The Killer — Tony is revealed as the serial killer Mary and Guinn have been seeking. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown investigation location
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Guinn Faces the Murderer — Tony confronts Guinn after the hidden killer's identity becomes central to the case. Characters: Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Tony Outwits Guinn — Tony outwits the detective who has been connected to Mary's police ambitions. Characters: Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Guinn Is Killed — Tony kills Guinn, removing a major investigator and protector from the case. Characters: Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Unknown confrontation location
A Costly Victory
Tony kills Guinn and attempts to kill Mary, but Mary outwits him. She refuses his pleas for help, and later fulfills her ambition by joining the police.
Key Events
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Guinn Is Killed — Tony kills Guinn, removing a major investigator and protector from the case. Characters: Tony Campbell, Detective Jerry Guinn
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Tony Turns Against Mary — After Guinn's death, Tony attempts to kill Mary. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Mary Outwits Tony — Mary defeats Tony and leaves him hanging for his life. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Mary Refuses Rescue — Despite Tony's pleas, Mary does not save him, allowing him to fall to his death. Characters: Mary Giordano, Tony Campbell
Location: Unknown confrontation location
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Weeks Pass After Graduation — Several weeks after Mary's twelfth-grade graduation, her aspiration reaches its final stage. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Burlingame, California
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Mary Joins the Police — Mary appears in a police uniform, having followed in her father's footsteps. Characters: Mary Giordano
Location: Police department
Mary Giordano is a bright, intelligent student who goes to a catholic school. She also has an addiction to mystery novels and detective magazines, which inspire her to do her own detective work. When she starts snooping around on the case of a murderer of teenage girls, it gets her in hot water with her mentor Detective Jerry Gunn. But it also starts a team up with police cadet Tony Campbell. The two work together to find the murderer. But the closer Mary gets to solving the murder, the more danger she puts herself in of being the next victim.