Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Rules Behind the Alps
The Gymnast trains under the Coach's coercive authority. Alps is introduced as a secretive service that substitutes for the dead during mourning.
Key Events
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Carmina Burana Routine — The Gymnast performs a rigid rhythmic gymnastics routine for the Coach. Characters: Gymnast, Coach
Location: Gymnasium
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Threat Over Music — The Coach rejects pop music and threatens the Gymnast for questioning him. Characters: Gymnast, Coach
Location: Gymnasium
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Alps Meeting — Alps members meet and operate a paid substitution service for grieving clients. Characters: Nurse, Coach, Gymnast
Location: Gymnasium
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Critical Athlete Case — The Nurse encounters the Tennis Player, who is critically injured after a car accident. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Hospital
The Dying Athlete
The Nurse encounters the critically injured Tennis Player and gathers information for a possible substitution. Her professional observation gradually becomes personal attachment.
Key Events
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Identity Research Begins — The Nurse studies the Tennis Player to prepare for a possible substitution. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Hospital
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False Recovery — The Nurse tells the Tennis Player and her family that she will survive. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Hospital
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Athlete Dies — The Tennis Player dies, creating the opportunity for the substitution. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Hospital
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Substitution Offer — The Nurse offers to act as the deceased Tennis Player for the grieving family. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Tennis Player's home
Boundaries Collapse
The Nurse performs assignments for clients but violates Alps' prohibition on sexual relations. She secretly visits the Tennis Player's family and becomes increasingly committed to impersonating her.
Key Events
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Lamp Shop Assignment — The Nurse performs a paid substitution for the grieving Lamp Shop Owner. Characters: Nurse, Lamp Shop Owner
Location: Lamp shop
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Forbidden Intimacy — The Nurse has sex with the Lamp Shop Owner despite Alps' rules. Characters: Nurse, Lamp Shop Owner
Location: Lamp Shop Owner's home
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Secret Family Visits — The Nurse secretly visits the Tennis Player's family and practices acting like her. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Tennis Player's home
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Boyfriend Reenactment — The Nurse reenacts a scene with the Tennis Player's boyfriend and deepens her attachment. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Tennis Player's home
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Suspicious Absences — The Nurse misses Alps meetings and lies about her whereabouts, causing suspicion. Characters: Nurse, Coach, Gymnast
Location: Gymnasium
Expulsion from Alps
The other members discover the Nurse's deception and unauthorized attachment. The Coach attacks and expels her, assigning the Gymnast to replace her.
Key Events
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Truth Discovered — The Coach follows the Nurse and discovers her unauthorized relationship with the family. Characters: Nurse, Coach
Location: Tennis Player's home
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Club Strike — The Coach strikes the Nurse in the face with a training club. Characters: Nurse, Coach
Location: Gymnasium
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Expulsion and Replacement — The Coach expels the Nurse and assigns the Gymnast to replace her as the Tennis Player. Characters: Nurse, Coach, Gymnast, Tennis Player
Location: Gymnasium
The Locked-Out Substitute
After failed attempts to restore intimacy at home and in the ballroom, the Nurse breaks into the Tennis Player's house. The family rejects her and leaves her outside, while the Gymnast completes the approved performance.
Key Events
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Wound Stitched — The Nurse stitches the wound on her cheek and returns home. Characters: Nurse
Location: Nurse's home
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Failed Family Contact — The Nurse asks about her dead mother's preferences and attempts unwanted contact with her father. Characters: Nurse
Location: Nurse's home
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Dance Floor Breakdown — The Nurse aggressively approaches her father's dance partner and continues after the woman falls. Characters: Nurse
Location: Ballroom
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Glass Door Break-In — The Nurse breaks through the sliding-glass door after receiving no answer. Characters: Nurse
Location: Tennis Player's home
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Bedside Reenactment — The Nurse gets into the Tennis Player's bed and repeats lines from the earlier reenactment. Characters: Nurse, Tennis Player
Location: Tennis Player's bedroom
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Shuttered Rejection — The Nurse is forcibly thrown out as a metal shutter closes over the broken entrance. Characters: Nurse
Location: Tennis Player's patio
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Popcorn Performance — The Gymnast performs elegantly to Popcorn while the Coach watches proudly. Characters: Gymnast, Coach
Location: Gymnasium
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Embrace and Echo — The Gymnast embraces the Coach, praises him, and then loses her smile. Characters: Gymnast, Coach
Location: Gymnasium
A nurse, a paramedic, a gymnast and her coach offer a service for hire wherein they stand in for dead people by appointment, hired by relatives, friends or colleagues of the deceased, to assist with the grieving process.