Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Lives Without Direction
Patrick works as a failed boxer's backup in northern France and lives through heavy drinking and fleeting encounters. Nathaniel survives through minor scams that repeatedly end in violence.
Key Events
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Patrick Fights As Backup — Patrick works as a failed boxer's backup on northern rings. Characters: Patrick
Location: Northern France
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A Drifting Existence — Patrick's life is marked by drinking and aimless relationships. Characters: Patrick
Location: Northern France
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Nathaniel's Failed Scams — Nathaniel performs low-level scams that repeatedly fail. Characters: Nathaniel
Location: Northern France
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Scams End In Beatings — Nathaniel's scams regularly end with him being beaten. Characters: Nathaniel
Location: Northern France
Trouble At The Bar
Patrick and Nathaniel meet in a bar. When two people seeking revenge for Nathaniel's scams threaten him, Patrick chooses to defend him.
Key Events
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Scams End In Beatings — Nathaniel's scams regularly end with him being beaten. Characters: Nathaniel
Location: Northern France
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The Bar Encounter — Patrick and Nathaniel meet for the first time in a bar. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: A bar
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Victims Demand Revenge — Two people angered by Nathaniel's scams threaten him in the bar. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: A bar
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Patrick Defends Nathaniel — Patrick intervenes and protects Nathaniel from the two avengers. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: A bar
Leaving The North
After the bar incident, Patrick and Nathaniel become drunk and leave northern France together. Their impulsive departure begins a shared journey.
Key Events
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A Drunken Decision — After becoming drunk, the two men decide to leave northern France. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: Northern France
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The Road South — Patrick and Nathaniel travel together toward Narbonne-Plage. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: The road to Narbonne-Plage
The Road To Narbonne
The two men travel toward Narbonne-Plage. Their destination is connected to Nathaniel's cousin, who runs a pizza van.
Key Events
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The Road South — Patrick and Nathaniel travel together toward Narbonne-Plage. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: The road to Narbonne-Plage
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Narbonne-Plage Destination — They head to Narbonne-Plage, where Nathaniel's cousin runs a pizza van. Characters: Patrick, Nathaniel
Location: Narbonne-Plage