Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Bankrupt Declaration
Grand Fenwick faces economic ruin after imitation wine floods the market. Prime Minister Mountjoy devises a desperate plan to declare war on the US and accept surrender aid. Duchess Gloriana reluctantly approves, sending Tully Bascomb and Will Buckley to lead the medieval contingent.
Key Events
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Bankruptcy of Grand Fenwick — Economy collapses due to cheaper imitation wine. Location: Grand Fenwick
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Mountjoy's War Plan — Prime Minister devises surrender strategy for economic aid. Location: Duchy Palace
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Duchess Approves Plan — Duchess reluctantly agrees to declare war on America. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Duchy Throne Room
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Troops Depart for America — 20 soldiers board merchant ship for transatlantic voyage. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Will Buckley
Location: Grand Fenwick Port
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Arrival in New York Harbor — Contingent arrives during city-wide air-raid drill. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Will Buckley
Location: New York Harbor
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Mistaken for Martians — Deserted city leads officials to believe invasion is alien. Characters: General Snippet
Location: New York Streets
The Martian Misunderstanding
The Fenwick troops arrive in New York during a deserted air-raid drill and are mistaken for Martians. General Snippet investigates but is quickly captured alongside police officers. Tully discovers the Q Bomb prototype and declares victory.
Key Events
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Mistaken for Martians — Deserted city leads officials to believe invasion is alien. Characters: General Snippet
Location: New York Streets
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Jeep Tires Punctured — Fenwick troops disable jeep to neutralize pursuit. Characters: Will Buckley, General Snippet
Location: Manhattan Streets
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Snippet Taken Hostage — Troops capture general and four police officers. Characters: Will Buckley, General Snippet
Location: Manhattan Streets
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Discovery of Q Bomb — Tully finds unstable football-sized nuclear prototype. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Will Buckley, Professor Alfred Kokintz
Location: Kokintz Lab
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Victory Declared — Tully claims conquest and secures hostages for return. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Kokintz Lab
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Return to Grand Fenwick — Contingent sails back with hostages and bomb. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Will Buckley, Helen Kokintz
Location: Atlantic Ocean
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Duchess Indulges Tully — Duchess celebrates perceived victory over America. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Duchy Palace
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Mountjoy Resigns — Prime Minister quits in disgust at Tully's blunder. Location: Duchy Palace
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Tully Becomes Acting PM — Tully assumes leadership after prime minister's resignation. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Duchy Palace
Diplomatic Entanglements
Back in Grand Fenwick, political shifts occur as Mountjoy resigns and Tully becomes acting prime minister. The US avoids military retaliation and sends a Secretary of Defense to negotiate. Global powers compete for the weapon while Tully and Helen develop a romance.
Key Events
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Tully Becomes Acting PM — Tully assumes leadership after prime minister's resignation. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Duchy Palace
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US Sends Secretary of Defense — America avoids military force, chooses diplomatic terms. Location: Washington D.C.
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Global Aid Offers — Nations compete for weapon access and defensive aid. Location: Grand Fenwick
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Tully and Helen Romance — Hostage falls for Tully's simple charm despite initial disdain. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Helen Kokintz
Location: Duchy Gardens
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Snippet's Conspiracy — Plot to steal bomb and return hostages to America. Characters: General Snippet
Location: Secret Meeting
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Bomb Retrieval Chase — Tully pursues conspirators to recover the weapon. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, General Snippet
Location: Duchy Grounds
The Secret and the Mouse
Snippet and Mountjoy conspire to steal the bomb and return it to America, triggering a chase. Tully retrieves the weapon and agrees to favorable surrender terms. The bomb is later found to be a dud, but a mouse accidentally rearms it for a final twist.
Key Events
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Bomb Retrieval Chase — Tully pursues conspirators to recover the weapon. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, General Snippet
Location: Duchy Grounds
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Surrender Terms Agreed — Wine banned, aid granted, bomb retained by little nations. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe
Location: Duchy Throne Room
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Bomb Revealed as Dud — Prototype found completely harmless after damage check. Characters: Grand Duchess Gloriana XII / Prime Minister Count Rupert Mountjoy / Tully Bascombe, Helen Kokintz, Professor Alfred Kokintz
Location: Duchy Dungeon
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Mouse Rearms Bomb — Rodent triggers mechanism, bomb ready to explode. Location: Duchy Dungeon
The Duchy of Grand Fenwick decides that the only way to get out of their economic woes is to declare war on the United States, lose and accept foreign aid. They send an invasion force (in chain mail, armed with bows and arrows) to New York and they arrive during a nuclear drill that has cleared the streets.